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 Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: WillohWisp [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2016 18:26 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
It is amazing how well developed are Rin and Sess' personalities and attitudes. Great job. Full of imaginary. Cheers and hope to see many more of you fantastic stories.
 Title: Ignorancemustbebliss
Reviewed By: RavynSkye1  On: August 20, 2013 23:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
@murasaki shikibu 1) If you don't like it, don't read it, and GTFO instead of wank baiting. Don't like/Don't read is what MATURE people do. Do you see ME running around flaming Sess/Kagura fics? Nope. Because I'm not sad enough to CARE. You should probably look up 'wakashudo' and 'bi-do'. Both homosexual and heterosexual relationships between adults and children were formalized and the younger parties were in fact guided in the ways of sex by the older parties. There was sexual "training" that went on, along with the other things you mentioned. Especially for young children. You don't know shit. Also, Sess/Rin is now officially, without a doubt, CANON. Sess proposes MARRIAGE to Rin in the newly released Drama CD Asatte, (The day after Tomorrow), which is set five years after the epilogue. Sess says it's time to speak to Rin and Jaken responds, "「おー、お、お!? それはあれでござい 2414;すな? 人里で暮らすよりも 7578;生丸様の嫁として੄ 6;らすことを遂に…」" "Oh oh oh! You're talking about that! The choice for Rin to continue to live in the village or come back and live as Sesshoumaru-sama's BRIDE!" You can find the entire translation (not mine, by the way) and the context on tumblr... yukisssDOTtumblrDOTcomFORWARDSLASHpostFORWARDSLASH57930853399FORWARDSLASHin uyasha-wide-edition-special-cd If you want the CD, it's in Japanese, but you can get it as a freebie when you order all of the new re-released wideban editions of the IY manga. RT made it VERY clear what the intentions were in this drama CD and they are ROMANCE and Sess proposing MARRIAGE to Rin. Oh, and when I said 'ai' usually indicates romantic love, I meant that when someone says 'suki' they can mean 'I love that TV show' or 'I LOVE YOU', but the same isn't true for 'ai'. 'Ai' and 'koi' are most often associated with romantic love... Koi moreso than Ai, but I tend to use the Japanese that most people know, and more Westerners are familiar with 'Ai' than with 'Koi' and it's usages.
 Reviewed By: Pam (from LJ)  On: January 19, 2012 22:44 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Loved it! I actually had not read this yet. You do such a fantastic job at creating the mood: lusty, sexy.... yet still so innocent and sweet. Definitely another fav of mine!
 Reviewed By: Morzan's Elvish Daughter  On: February 05, 2011 18:24 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love everyone of these stories you have on here! You writing is great, you grammer needs a bit of help, and it wouldn't hurt for you to look over your stories a few times before you post just to make sure nothing is repeated or left out. :) Huggs and Kisses -Angel
 Title: try reading past the first chapter before reviewing
Reviewed By: kkkkkkkk2 obviously didn't read  On: October 21, 2010 00:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
It's clear you only read the first chapter of this which is said by ravyn skye-sama as being written for a prompt of "darkness". The rest of the whole chapters stories are not the similiar content and if you read all of this stories you will see this much more clearly. Read the rest of the whole stories before making a review because you sound not very intelligent when you play at reviewing before reading all of the whole chapters.
 Title: Of course he's guiding her... lovingly, slowly, gently, and because she ASKED
Reviewed By: RavynSky e  On: October 20, 2010 23:29 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well, since there are like... 23 chapters here, and about 4 individual stories and many oneshots, you're really going to have to be more specific, KKKKKKKK2. I have two fics here where Sess is a disgusting pedophile taking advantage of her, which were written as response to challenges... but the rest are clearly consensual, with RIN HAVING ALL THE POWER. I'm not sure what you were expecting... What, is Rin going to somehow overpower a grown male daiyoukai who is possibly the most powerful demon to ever live... Tie him up and rape him? UM... NO. This is about the two of them SHARING intimacy and love through physical pleasures, and he must gently guide her in how to go about such things. Read, "The Lord's Young Bride"... The first chapter he only pleasures her, and gets NOTHING from her in return... But he also ASKS how she feels, if she feels SAFE and comfortable. He then asks if he should continue and she says "Yes! Please... Kiss Rin ALL OVER!" He then gives her what she wants, and she THANKS HIM over and over. You think that she's supposed to know what to do, specifically? HOW, unless he teaches her? She's a CHILD. She doesn't know HOW to have sex... But the point is she wants the intimacy, the attention, and to LEARN how to express her love for him by SHARING physical pleasures. He IS guiding her. She's a child who WANTS to be guided. Rin is ADORED, LOVED, CHERISHED and NEVER taken advantage of or abused. The point is that she is ASKING for guidance. Rin WANTS it, and she holds ALL the power. She can say 'stop' and he will. His actions are guided by love. Things like, "She had discovered what him male on her own, and was fascinated. She touched so lightly, and kissed so sweetly, amazed at the power she seemed to have in delighting him. It was comical really, how she sought to tease and taste him, with no instruction given. She discovered for herself what would happen if she ground her tiny hips against him, and in her innocence had taken to doing so quite often, unembarrassed to claim the pleasure she saw no shame in. She was his, so why should there be shame?" And, "Rin looked up with a blush and coyly asked, "Can Sesshomaru-sama do that with Rin?" He dipped his head in response and removed his hand from her side, as she rolled towards, "Sit on my lap, facing me." He instructed in a whisper. The girl who had yet to change from her school uniform, a blue sailor-themed outfit with a skirt just above the knees, knee-socks, and a short sleeved shirt moved to straddle his lap. She was so tiny compared to his (rare for a Japanese man) tall frame that she had to stand on her knees to be within kissing distance. "How do we…?" She trailed off, unsure of where to go from here." Would CLEARLY indicate she's ASKING for guidance. Also, these fics are about loving guidance, Rin topping from the bottom. Him using his position in her life as Lord and protector and teacher to give her what she wants, and teach her how to accept pleasure, and, in the event she WANTS to reciprocate, how to give it. Because she's a CHILD she doesn't know what to do, and he guides her gently, without being manipulative or forceful. He's a protector, teacher, guardian, lover who is guiding her gently to learn about pleasure... Giving and receiving. My Sesshoumaru will continue to guide Rin, and to show her how to accept physical pleasure, and, in the event she ASKS how to please him in return, he will honestly answer and guide her on how to please him as well. If you don't like that, PLEASE STOP READING THE FICS. Thanks, RS
 Reviewed By: kkkkkkkk2  On: October 20, 2010 23:08 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, your writing is decent, but honestly, I heard that in your fics the kid is supposed to be empowered...and she doesn't seem empowered to me. To me, this seems like grooming when he's sitting there, telling her what to do. I don't know...
 Title: I love your work!
Reviewed By: kikenshi  On: March 27, 2010 01:29 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love you, Skye-sama, and all your stories. Those assholes on fanfic.net don't know what the hell they are talking about. Whoever reported you for that is a close minded idiot closet case. This story is pure art, and shows off your talent perfectly. All those other people are just jealous they can't write as well as you or be nearly as creative as you are. You will always be a total inspiration and a sesshoumaru/rin fanfic ICON. You are the goddess of SessRin lolicon no one can ever match you. There may have been lolicon before but no one does it like you do and no one will ever match you. You are without rival and your fans love you. You are way too nice sometimes don't deserve all the crap you get from jealous idiots. You are the Queen of SessRin, the Queen of Lolicon, and all should bow down to your creative genius.
 Title: Thanks very much
Reviewed By: PinkBeadGirl  On: March 23, 2010 10:10 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read one of your stories for the first time on ff.net and was so delighted, I followed your prompt here. I've loved what I have read here too. I thank you for the gift of pleasure reading your work brings me. What I particularly like about your writing is the excellent story line you build as well as the sense of love and caring between Sess and Rin. It makes the explicitness truly sensual and erotic rather than just 'sex'. That's an important element to me, I want to read something with a little sensuality and elegance, not just porn. I also thank you for the extremely detailed warnings you place at the beginning of your stories. It allows me to know what I am about to read and it allows me to make an informed decision as to whether I continue or not. I love Sess and Rin in feudal Japan whereas the more present time portrayal made me a little anxious and therefore I simply skipped those ones. I have no problems with anyone else choosing to read those ones ( to each his own) and your excellent warning labels allowed me that freedom of choice. I look forward to reading the rest of your offerings here and on ff.net. Once again thankyou very much and long may your muse be kind to you. Regards from PinkBeadGirl.
 Reviewed By: lockdown  On: March 16, 2010 16:35 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really love your AU versions of this pair. I really want to see TLCBW be continued on. Really sucks about ff.net. I was wondering where you went. Don't give up, there are plenty of us in the shadows always reading.
 Title: FF.net sucks!
Reviewed By: Nightlove1  On: March 12, 2010 16:54 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think these are the best stories every and you should not quit! *huggles you*
 Reviewed By: Ratet [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 11, 2010 21:59 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was good. It was very romantic and sweet. Top quality stuff, as I would expect from you. People will always love your work. Don't let ff.net get you down.
 Reviewed By: Meriadeth  On: March 11, 2010 13:15 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was upset that ff. did that to you but I will never stop reading your stories, Keep up the awesome work
 Title: FFNet
Reviewed By: Ou-Rex  On: March 10, 2010 22:59 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yep... still loving it Skye-chan xD Go go! Stoopid FF.net finally kicked you off huh? Darn flamers. I was wondering why no updates I was sooo upset. Keep at it! I'l l always be ninja reading your stories XD
 Reviewed By: jazzberry  On: March 10, 2010 19:48 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved it truly enjoyed it. Sorry you got pulled off of ff seems like everything is being pulled off. Keep up the good work your an amazing writer
 Reviewed By: anonymouse2  On: March 10, 2010 18:18 PST
Comment/Review:
So writing lolicon unlike anyone else in this pairing is not creative. Good to know. *looks down* Obvious sock is obvious
 Reviewed By: Akuneko [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 10, 2010 14:53 PST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoy reading Sess/Rin fics, and think Loli-con is interesting, but this has the be the most boring tripe I've ever read. Your writing style is very monotonous, you make many errors in spelling and grammar, and you have no characterization at all. I suggest maybe taking a creative writing class in your spare time, because you have very little talent in writing. You're telling instead of showing. I can't imagine any of the scenes in my head, which is what I should be able to do with a good story. I keep hearing that your work is supposed to be amazing, but I'm not sure why because it's certainly not reflected here. I'm very disappointed.
 Title: FF.net
Reviewed By: The ISIMS  On: March 03, 2010 15:34 PST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I hate that it was taken off FF.net cuz it is still a really awesome story! keep writing!
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