| "The Proposal" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: mae_may On: March 21, 2010 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAH!!! THAT"S HILARIOUS HOW SHIPPO TRICKED INU! ^_^ I admit that I would have fallen for his mischieviousness. Then I'll be really irritated and furious because of this humiliation-so I can sympatize with Inu here. Anyway,I think your plot is going in a brilliant direction... so I hope you'll continue w/ The Proposal -- and writing in general. ^_^ And if you get attack by the plot bunnies again... don't forget to set up a trap for them!
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Reviewed By: mae_may On: March 02, 2010 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent Intro! ^_^ I hope you'll continue this story! I've always wondered what could happen between Inuyasha and Kagome got married soon after she returned. I like how you use the original aspects of each character in your own way! Will Inu and Kag have kids too? ^_~ Hope you'll keep up with your passion for writing!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha, very cute beginning, and I'm really glad this isn't a one-shot. It reads like it could be, although naturally, it'd be one of those one-shots that always leave you wanting more. So it looks like we will actually be getting that more. Goodie goodie! I can't wait! :-)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 00:19 CST
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laughed just as heartily the second time around. nice of you to move it here, but since i already read it-- i knew it sounded familiar and with a little investigation i have discovered your alias!! =p i still think you should add one with his brother, one would believe sesshoumaru would find that extremely amusing LOL ♥
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