| "One Whole" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: tuatara On: May 22, 2013 02:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this a lot, and I really hope to see more of it. The spelling and grammar could certainly be improved, but the plot and characterization are great so far. Thanks for sharing it! |
Title: "One Whole"
Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2013 03:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the story you have though you have several grammar mistakes in each chapter, I highly recommend you get a beta-reader to look over everything before you post in the future. I look forward to more |
Reviewed By: Ryan L. Spradling On: June 05, 2012 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this. |
