| "Ward" Reviews/Comments [ 101 ] |
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Reviewed By: lell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2011 19:02 EDT
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This was an amazing story. At times I felt annoyed with bulma's distrust of vegeta, but i could see that she was hurting. great characters and great story! |
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2011 23:34 EST
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and my third time reading this one... I feel like this is my all time favorite fic, hands down. :) Its not often I find a story, book, or even movie I can enjoy multiple times. :) but this I know I will continue to read as often as possible, almost makes me think I should print it out and keep it with my books :P |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2011 08:33 EST
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You, my dear, are awesome. This story is epic and brought much joy into my mundane life. Thanks for that ;P |
Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2006 11:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, lots of twists and turns, please write some more...
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Title: Ward
Reviewed By: Sally Alane On: June 25, 2005 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good fic. I enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: Sophie Bloom On: January 26, 2005 13:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Wonderful wonderful! Words cannot describe the love I feel for this story. By far the best fic I have ever had the luck of reading!
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Title: Uh...
Reviewed By: Sophie Bloom On: January 26, 2005 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Wonderful wonderful! Words cannot describe the love I feel for this story. By far the best fic I have ever had the luck of reading!
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 12:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**stands and claps** this fic was wonderful! Bravo! I really enjoyed this. Even more so becouse I found it already compete. LOL I got to read it from start to finsh in one sitting. Plot twist and angst! Thank you for writting it! Wind to your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was beautifully written. I loved the story line and the fact that it was in no way superficial. The twists you added in were spectacular. The story was very creative and didn't contain most of the horrid cliches that are littered throughout the majority of B/V fics. I applaud you. You are now one of my favorite authors on this site. I'm even inspired to finish working on my own fic or perhaps to spruce it up a little. Keep up the brilliant writing and I'll keep reading!
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Title: ward
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 22:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story........wish there was more of it.sorry thats it's over...
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Title: Kit and kabuttall
Reviewed By: BessMary On: October 28, 2003 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been away for 3months and all I could think of was getting bac to my pc to finish this story!!!! IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT was Fantastic ,now girlfriend get on the ball or pc lol and start Unwanted!!!!!!!!!!Im a LVG JUNKIE I need my fix!!!! lol LMAO I have no life !
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always looked forward to seeing an update to Ward, LGV. You took the wonderful fairytale of the helpless princess, the handsome prince, the evil villain, and everything in between and fit in all the DBZ characters we know and love.
I've so enjoyed this fic, from the very first chapter. It's been difficult not to beg you to post faster, but I've tried to be a patient reader. I especially loved your portrayal of Vegeta. :)
Thank you for an entertaining journey with plenty of drama, angst, romance, and *sigh* passion. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 30, 2003 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! All of the loose ends are tied up and Bulma and Vegeta can live Happily ever after. Vegeta reading the sex scenes from her dreams in Bulma's diary was quite amusing. This is a wonderful story; I look forward to reading the epilogue. ~Gail~ |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 29, 2003 16:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic it was WELL detailed and everything!! ^_^ Will there be a sequile? |
Reviewed By: Tess Mort (Tessa) On: July 29, 2003 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, yes, YES! They're finally together! Forever and always! And the lemon last chapter was superb! *Glomps Lavender Goddess* I'm sad Radditz left, but I'm sure he'll be tied in to the Epilouge. (which, by the way, I am so very excited for!) I'll miss this fic so much; it was truly one of my favorite B/V's of all time!
Never stop writing fanfiction-- ever. Please? |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: July 28, 2003 17:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo~ the long awaited update! Very sweet, romantic ending to a great B/V romance : ) Hope you start another B/V soon! |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 20, 2003 23:19 EDT
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Yay! Thank goodness! AT last!
Great 2 chapters, can't wait for the next. |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 13, 2003 21:58 EDT
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Nice work keep going. |
Reviewed By: Vitaralastla On: July 11, 2003 23:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did really well, and I'd recommend taking up serious writing if you haven't already. I enjoyed the way you kept to the pre-set characteristics of Vegeta and the gang, while keeping things origional at the same time. *You got a slightly lower mark for Origionality only because the them of Ward falls in love with Warden thing has been done many times before, but I still enjoyed this version much more than I have in any book or Fan Fic I've read yet. Keep up the good work and for God's sake don't put out the next chapter soon!!!! :) |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: July 03, 2003 18:21 EDT
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Fantastic! More, more, more! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: July 02, 2003 22:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ PLEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ PLEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ UPDATE ITS GREAT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 |
Reviewed By: Tasha On: June 28, 2003 10:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter plz do continue, can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 00:45 EDT
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If I send you chocolate will you make everything better in the next chapter?
I know these cliffhangers are simply the work of a very good author, but I swear I'm starting to get an ulcer!
OK, if you don't buy that, I did have to color my hair earlier than usual because of the gray... I blame it on you! |
Reviewed By: outtadaloop On: June 22, 2003 15:40 EDT
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Glad that Vegeta now truly knows the whole story!! Who's the bastard that shot Vegeta? Update plz!!! |
Reviewed By: Cat On: June 22, 2003 15:24 EDT
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That is just evil to end it there. You better hurry up, I cannot wait another week to find out what happens. Great story, btw. |
Reviewed By: Tsukino On: June 16, 2003 16:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good! Plz continue! I have read all your stories and I think they are VERY well written. Keep up the good work LGV, you really do have a talent. |
Reviewed By: Vejitalover On: June 16, 2003 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Torture! Ok, this chapter was wonderful, but what an evil cliffhanger!!! Please hurry and post the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Sluggy On: June 16, 2003 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruel is too nice of a description of that chapter...I would have said YAY! Vejiita opens the journal, too, IF HE HAD OPENED IT TO THE END AND NOT THE FRIGGEN BEGINNING!!! It's gonna take him eons to read 8 years of entries! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chappie, though. Keep it up or I'll sic my Radditz action figure on you! :D |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 17:58 EDT
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I'm taking back all the nice things I've said about you - that was just plain CRUEL!!!
I'm just glad Vegeta opened the friggin' diary! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 22:01 EDT
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Ugh! You know that horrible feeling in your chest when you just know something terrible is going to happen? Well, it just kept on building in mine the further I read into this chapter. Talk about tense!
It's pretty bad when I'm sitting here yelling at my computer screen. :(
I want Radditz to say something... I want Bulma to say something... I want Vegeta to go ahead and push Junana off a cliff... Oops, I didn't mean to verbalize that last thought. O.o
This was a great chapter, LGV! Lots of angst and all. You've done a fantastic job of making me truly hate Junana. Really - that cliff idea isn't so bad, is it? ;) |
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