| "Out of Control" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Hidecki On: July 20, 2005 03:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Excellent! Entertaining story and hot to boot!!
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Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 09:43 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think everything was burning in desire between them. Now if all of this happned in the real thing.
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Reviewed By: Airen On: June 04, 2003 17:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very humorous. ^_____^
I'm kind of wishing I had read this before I read Executive Orders. Oh well. This whole series is terribly entertaining!
::nabs Heero and runs off with him:: |
Reviewed By: Phoenix7 On: March 31, 2003 08:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Now, This IS How Heero And Relena Should Have Done Things On Libra, Or Maybe At The End Of EW!!!!!!! ^-^!! NICE JOB!!!! Great Story, Great Spelling, And I Hope To See More Soon! |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 18, 2003 14:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Dang! It's got hot in HHHEEEEEERRRRRREEEEE! Whew, need to fan myself! Loved the lemon and romance. I'll always love this coupling. |
Reviewed By: Sage On: February 09, 2003 00:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: EEEE!! I love this fic!! I was so sad when damn ffnet put up the NC17 ban. Grrr!! But oh well, now I can read the whole thing again! Hehe. This is one of my favorite fics, and I can't wait for the sequel! Bye-ya! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Seak5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 16:10 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, wow!. I haven't read a Heero and Relena lemon in along time and this is really, really good.
Whooaaa!!! IS IT HOT IN HERE OR WHAT?!! |
Reviewed By: Jaxom125 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 13:14 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good story. I'm guessing by Equitation you meant Equestrian. |
Reviewed By: Kelli On: January 09, 2003 23:48 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *whistles* That was a really good lemon and humorous to boot. |
Reviewed By: Xellia On: January 01, 2003 01:31 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: SMOKING UP MY COMPUTER SCREEN! |
Reviewed By: lizabee On: October 07, 2002 16:55 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i liekd that it was really cute and the lemon was awesome... oh this is liz/ aka mama-sama form ffn |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 09, 2003 01:55 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I have found it! At last! Finally i have found a really good Heero/Relena romance/lemon. I mean all the others seem to be Quatre/Duo pairings which frankly is quite grose. Any ways awsome job on this fanfic. Hot, steamy, very sexy and eveything else needed in any kind of decent lemon!(HeHe) |