| "Goku's Daughter?!" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty *still going here* ~Vegeta's Mate and Lover for Life, Veggie_Luva_101
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty pretty (goes on until next year) pretty PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE UUUUUPDAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 14:23 CST
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PALEAASE UPDATE!!!!!!! this is such an interesting story! i neeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to know what happens next! >.< (
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Reviewed By: Allison On: February 08, 2004 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Soon!!!! Is someone really inside of Keri? Why do you never visit your own stories?!?! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Side On: June 07, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story... But chapters could be longer... |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, don't worry about the delay of a chapter. It's perfectly okay. It doesn't sound fun, what you went through. Great fic, keep up the work, see-ya! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 20:
I thought that was hilarious how Piccolo fell out of the sky. I was laughing right along with Goten and Keri. I luv ur fic! |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an awesome story! I am loving it!! Keep it up!!
~Ami |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 14:27 CST
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YAY! Goku's home again! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 20:43 CST
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Wonderful! I loving it all along the way! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this a great fan fic keep it up and Ill read it on to the end |
Reviewed By: Dalem On: December 08, 2002 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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Your story is pretty good. And it's really cute too ^.^ The chapters are too short though. It's like before I'm reading I'm already done. Could you make your chapters a lil longer, not going on and on. Just like two or three pages insted of one. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2002 18:42 CST
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He! He! My second review! You are really going good with this fic and I can wait to see what will happen to Keri and Gohan! Great Job! |
Reviewed By: Aurora_Glory_Alice On: November 30, 2002 00:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool! I kinda like the fact that the chapters are short...dunno why, though. This is a really good idea. I must see more |
Reviewed By: ~Krissy~ On: November 28, 2002 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! The story itself is really good but the chapters are wicked short :-( I like it and i can't wait to read more ^_^ |
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