| "Falling in Love a Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2011 20:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing. I'm a huge fan of yours. I hope u still read your reviews. Hopefully someday you will come back and finish your other fics. |
Reviewed By: saiyan_gerl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2009 03:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story idea was very original and perfectly in character! I loved the interactions with Trunks and Vegeta, especially when Trunks had to call him by his name instead of Dad. This was a perfect follow up to Falling In Love For The First Time, which I admit I read that one first even though it was the prequel.
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Reviewed By: mulattogurl08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 05:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one of the best fics i have ever read, and lets just put it this way...i've read MANY fics ^_^ The idea for the story was GENIUS and the portrayal of the characters and their feelings was AMAZING!! i was instantly hooked by this beautiful story and i read it all in one sitting!!!! please keep writing!!! you have great talent!
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 23:38 EST
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Adored this fic! All of it was so convincing. I could feel both their pains and frustration. The chapter Misommunications was masterfully done. Excellent!!! You are an excellent writer and know your Vegita and your Bulma. Congratulations on such a great fic.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
funny!!!love the way you woven the characters together and seeing a different side of vegeta
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 12:27 EDT
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wow chi chi is a coniving bitch!
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Reviewed By: aaMY On: July 03, 2005 23:44 EDT
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THE ST0RY WAS BEAUTiFUL ! THE BEST i`VE READ S0 FAR ..
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: April 14, 2005 10:42 EDT
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Hi there! I just read this story again for what has to be nearing the fiftieth time and I was just amazed once more at how truly wonderful your talents are. Your stories are downright therapeutic; there's no better remedy to alleviate stress levels after a hard day / week / month and I just wanted you to know that your writing has truly touched my life. Thanks for all your hard work and may you never lay that proverbial pen to rest ^_~
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Reviewed By: snowecat On: October 17, 2004 18:02 EDT
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I still prefer the original version that was posted on FFnet. The part with Gohan and Trunks was pricless.
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Reviewed By: Samantha Delier On: August 16, 2004 01:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD! It is like so like good. You know, like, if you like, wrote a book, like it would like be like sooooo COOOOOOOOOOOOL! LOVE ya hun! OH yeah, Vegeta definitely has a unique ass. Oooo, I'm lovin' it.
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Reviewed By: Milly Langhern On: August 16, 2004 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written, sort of rushed, loved characterization. Oh yeah, Vegeta's hot. Trunk is too. ;)
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Reviewed By: Swtxlilazngrl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 20:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv dis story, i sorta think ish kinda funny especially how ironic vegeta was acting in here compared to the episodes. i like it, plz update soon even though u jus updated 2day.. hehe... ne wayz i jus think that the title would b betta if it was called 'amnesia' but dont mind me. i like ur title now, im jus saying. sorri bout da rambling.
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Reviewed By: backcracking kitty On: December 16, 2003 10:31 EST
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This was just filled with writing goodness with a sugar-filled center! I just absolutely loved it! You're awesome, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: PhoenixMageFire On: March 09, 2003 23:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Vegeta’s eyes widened in bafflement, he suddenly knew what it felt like to be Kakarrot."
I LOVE this line! |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 21:38 EST
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I finally got to reading this this weekend, and it was a great story. I really liked how you wrote in fragments of Bulma's memory, and of course how unusually sensitive Vegeta was to the whole situation. I really felt badly for him! The whole mixup with everyone thinking Bulma slept with Yamcha was pretty funny, as was Goku & ChiChi's surprise appearance in their bedroom. Ha ha! I've got to get caught up on the prequel now to see how these two got together... :) |
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