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Reviewed By: SammyBaby99 On: November 28, 2011 20:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my fucking KAMI this story was AMAZING!! I literally FELT the anguish, the pleasure, the sorrow. I cried when Goku broke into tears. You captured Vegeta's charcater perfectly and KEPT HIM THE SAME throughout this magnificent story. The passion in the scenes was overwhelming! Dialogue and speech was flawless, this left my wanting more. The ending was so simple, so sweet!! I absolutely LOVED everything. You give me hopelessly large amounts of inspiration! I was on YouTube, and there was this thing about anti-yaio, and I read a comment that said your story changes there perspective of yaoi. I understand why now, I followed the link and ended up reading this all in 5 hours nonstop. Amazing story, plot, theme, everything. This was so cute!! (GokuXVegeta FOREVER) I would give this a 1000000000000000000000000 out of ten, defiantly one of my new Favs. |
Title: It still manages to get to me ^_^
Reviewed By: Renaena On: September 23, 2008 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If i was able to give you an 11 then .. i would have. * gosh * this was such an interesting read. I actually read this about a year or two ago .. then i stop reading fanfiction all together. But when my little sister started reading fanfiction i knew that the first one that i wanted to read again was this one ! im sooo sorry that i didnt comment sooner! oh well .. you know how happy this fanfic makes everyone so that is a good thing !! i cant wait to read more by you !! you are wonderful !!
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Reviewed By: petshop On: April 05, 2008 02:09 EDT
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This fic has been recommended by Petshop on Yumegatari @ http:// www .yumegatari .pmsinfirm. org/?p=20
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Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 04:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank-you for the hours of enjoyment you gave me with this story. I loved every word of it and you ended it perfectly. You kept the characters of Goku and Vegeta as intact as possible and just made me love them a thousand times over again.
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Title: Double Wow
Reviewed By: Azmidiske [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 07:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your story has left me totally speechless to say the least. I have read numerous fan fics before, and only and handful of dragon ball z ones. I have a feeling never again will I read a romance story as good as this one, which ironically comes from a pairing only 1 week ago never would have crossed my mind. Beautiful, exciting, erotic, depressing, enlightening, the list goes on. I am still at a loss for words to express the feelings this story truly manifests in me, almost makes me wish finding a life mate was possible through the melding of two peoples minds to become one essentially equal being. If only it were so simple in reality. I seem to be getting off topic, but in a way I feel no more words are really necessary to explain to you how great your story truly is, you know it's good, just know I have never read one better. Keep it real; Azmidiske
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Reviewed By: Reikun On: July 10, 2006 15:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most amazing thing I have ever read...o.O The author should seriously publish his/her own work. I would buy everything he/she wrote! ^_^
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 07:53 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I must say you did a really good job with both characters in this story. I felt sorry for both of them but I'm so happy it worked out. Nice work.
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Reviewed By: Nettie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic. Before I read this I honestly felt that Goku and Vegeta were an impossible couple, but you've done it! You've kept them in perfect character at the same time as writing a thrilling and emotional story. Very well done! ^^ I actually found out about this fic from an article about NC-17 fanfics which recommended it and I must say that I'm glad I read that article! lol
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Title: Ch 10
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 05:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Absolutely incredible! I've never thought of this pairing before to be honest with you but you make me believe it. I can honestly see Kakarotto and Vejiita together now. Losing their human wives is an issue they will both have to face as Saiyajins. Your story fits perfectly with the anime series; you always kept in character and you touched on issues that every DBZ fan holds near and dear. Extraordinarily believable, thought provoking and emotional. I was transfixed by this fic; I cried, laughed, worried and utterly loved every emotion invoked. Masterfully done. I'm sad to see it end but simultaneously wholly satisfied with the fic. You are an extremely devoted and talented writer. You inspire me!
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Title: ch 1
Reviewed By: kappei_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2005 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely incredible writing. Your characterization is amazing. I cannot describe how much this first chapter has affected me. Beyond words…beyond my simple praise. Beautiful…I really felt the pain, the anguish and then the hope, the need for something to live for. Quite simply astounding.
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Reviewed By: DIZbITcH On: August 16, 2005 09:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOOOO THIS SHIT IS HOT .... ALSO READ PURPLE SOCKS FOR ELSIE ...ITS GOING TO BE HOT JUST LIKE URZ
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Title: Excellent stuff
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just finding the Dragon Ball Z universe and I saw your fic. This was really excellent. I love angsty, love/hate/confusion type fics and I have grown to really like the Vegeta/Goku characters. I am not an expert, but they really came to life for me in this story, and I particularly like the respect you gave to Bulma. So often in these kinds of stories, the females get treated rather poorly. And Vegeta's continuing love for her was most touching. I plan on reading more.
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Title: Chains of Affection.........................IT ROCKS!
Reviewed By: hols On: April 05, 2005 10:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, what an amazing fanfic!!!!! This is the story of Vegeta and Goku's new found, er, "FRIENDSHIP" with one another after Bulma's death, and it is INCREDIBLE. It is really quite sickening in parts, but throughout I was consistently impressed that it never disgusted me, just made my reading more and more interesting and attention-grabbing. I thought I was quite good at english until I read this! The standards set by the author are VERY high........his/her linguistic talents truly astounded me, and all the things that happened tied together at the end in a sastifying and fulfilling manner. I absolutely LOVED the way Goku was so nonplussed about telling Gohan, Goten, Trunks and the others about his mating with Vegeta (so very very Goku lol) and I thought the way in which they reacted was superb, and highly amusing. I think of this fanfic as harrowing, graphic yet VERY VERY readable..........it kept me constantly encapsulated, and you stopped from flicking straight to chapter ten as all the issues were resolved throughout, and in different and witty ways. So, I'd like to congratulate Syldana the author, particularly for two things...........one, for keeping me entertained (a great talent in itself, trust me lol) and two for writing such a breathtaking story, that delights and doesn't disgust. GO YOU!
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Title: Breath Taking
Reviewed By: Mizstudmuffin On: November 21, 2004 15:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful that describes everything !!!!
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Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I was searching for yaoi and found your story. What can i say - it's great! All ten chapters are wonderful! Thank you!
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