| "Last Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maru4 On: March 25, 2004 08:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this fic and the ending was good too.i hope you never change a word
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Reviewed By: Shu-chan On: January 04, 2004 18:56 CST
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I totally loved the last few chapters! Sorry I haven't been around, school's been holding me up, and the updates were well worth the wait. ^^ and i won't miss another update!! mm has sent me updates for the story. =) Oh, I can't wait to see if heero goes to shinigami or duo! hurry, hurry! please?
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Reviewed By: AmourDuGreenleaf On: January 01, 2004 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesomely written fic! I love your style of writing, its very personal. This is one the reasons why i am so impassioned to read Gundam Wing fanfiction is because of writers like you. The dialogue is what really captured me in the beignning-specfically Duos. Now i'm really into the whole description of the story. I usually just skim what most people describe because its all the same crap, but you dont dwell on that and let's just say that i APPERCIATE that on the whole! ^_^ On a somewhat different note....I really really really want to hurt you!!! I need more to read, PLEASE UPDATE!! I'm dying to read more! Love everything so far!
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Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, this story is soo good and you are taking long to write it. You really know how to keep people hooked. |
Reviewed By: Kat1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn it! Duo is being a little ass, he needs to stay in one stop so that Heero can tell him he loves him! Man, I want you to add more soon. this is too good. |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 20:58 CDT
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You have to continue this! I need to know if this is truly the end for Duo and Heero, and if Duo's gonna die in the end or not. Oh, oh, please hurry this up! ^^ And I love how you have Shingami. I always thought the God of Death would be a lot darker, but, this God of Death is haliriously funny and cute!! ^_^ Oh, do keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cheers*
Good story, I enjoy this alot. I can't wait to read more! It's freaky how things like having 3 days to confess your love can happen, (can they?! o.O it'd be nice, huh?) Do keep up the good work, and feel free to IM me on AIM at DacesWithFire420. Ja! |
Reviewed By: Kit On: July 01, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was cute. Damn, Heero doesnt have time to sleep, he needs to be working. Well.. maybe a little time to sleep. Aww they are cute. |
Reviewed By: Kit On: June 30, 2003 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruel! that is all I have to say. You are cruel to just it there. I mean, damn that is wrong. you have to update like soon. real soon. That is evil to just stop there. |
Reviewed By: Kerbuddy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows* this is a great fic! but DAMN THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!! i shall destroy them all with mi amazing ninja skills! Ch'cha! mwhahahah! Next chappy sometime soon plz! ^^; |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 02:45 CDT
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Evil Cliffhanger.... now Heero will be unconscious for a while and loose a lot of time. But Duo has time to cool down and think a little, maybe call Relena and discover that Heero left her. Maybe, maybe not.
When will you update the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 13:24 CDT
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Shinigami has an interesting sense of...irony, perhaps?
Honestly, yeah, awkward for Heero to dump Relena on her birthday, but truly for the best. Not just because time is ticking, but when there is bad news like that, delaying it doesn't make it any easier. It would only make the good memories she'd have had of her birthday a complete lie - which would hurt more in the long run.
Although the domestic missiles she launched at Heero - not only understandable, but kinda funny. I can picture Heero trying to evade them as she hurls them at him in complete rage.
I'm interested in whatever else Duo was arrested for, since Heero had to abruptly end his time on the computer. |
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2003 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relena was cool, Heero deserves being hit by a brush. He can be glad, that she didn't had any heavy amunition anymore. lol
Schinigami is a cool character, I guess being as old as Death must be, life gets pretty boring and the moemory of having fun with a lovesick and guilt ridden Perfect soldiers will brighten his life for centuries.
I wonder what the next chapter will bring.
Duo in prision and Heero admitting his love through Ironbars with half a dozen police officers as witnesses?
Or will Heero use explosives and get Duo out of prision "gundam-stile" first?
giggle, well, next chapter.!!!!!Please |
Reviewed By: SilentWillow920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 18:02 CDT
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I hope you're continuing this. I LOVE Duo angst! Please? Pleeeease, Violet? **huge puppy eyes** |
Reviewed By: Storm_410 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 15:29 CDT
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*pats back* I never realized that you were so sick. Poor violet...
Interesting developments. I'm not sure what I think of this one. Reminds of a movie I saw once. Well kinda... not really... the movie was completly different from your story. Only similar thing was death, devil and a task. *shrugs* Eiother way the story is good. Like I said not sure what I think of this one yet. We shall see my friend, we shall see.
- Storm |
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