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"Never be a Stranger" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: CuteHtCchick  On: November 21, 2004 10:11 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i wanna see updates 4m u lil chick^-^
 Title: review^-^
Reviewed By: CuteHtCchick  On: November 21, 2004 10:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
im not goin 2 explain my rating 'cuz i jus dunno. but ill jus tell u wat i think it might be.. hõ about u put that ranmaz mother is at the hospital but ranma doesnt noe. ranma goes to her house but noe body is there but then he stays there anyways. when its time to go to bed.. shampoo n the other 2 girls jus soo happened to follow them and then they got all mad n decides to break the house down. Now ranma n serinity doesnt have any place to go.. then serinity trips and broke her ankle and cant walk. then taka n miaka shows up durin their date and offers them to stay at their house. they go to their house and they eat dinner n prepares to go to bed.. of course when serinity toke a bath.. miaka has a plan 2 set them up^-^.. she tells ranma the bath is ready and he goes in.. then he goes in the HUGE bath tub and serinity n ranma jus stare at eachother.. ranma goes koko and trys to get out.. but miaka locked the door so he cant get out^-^.. then serinity faints from bein in the water 4 so long n ranma nocks the door down.. they try to recover her but it no use.. luckily ranma noes how to lower it down.. he ask miaka n taka to leave them alone for a while. ranma undresses his shirt and hugs serinity. giving her warmth. at the end ranma says, "I will be by ur side forever. im not gonna let anythin happen to u. so dont worry" n the fall asleep. lil did they noe tha the girls where watching 4m the uncovered glass door. (ranma's mom freaks out sfter seein her house ruined)
 Reviewed By: Andy  On: March 07, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a good fanfic. Please ty to update it soon. I wanna see this fic continued.

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