| "Can't Help Myself:A Robin and Starfire Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: twisted_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 22:25 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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Reviewed By: HSA2 On: July 18, 2005 20:59 CDT
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Don't worry, I know about my flaws, there's a shitload of them that i've been trying to fix.
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Title: Bleh
Reviewed By: Vagon On: July 18, 2005 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to work on your Grammar a bit, as well as learning to lose all that ooc commenting. I didnt see why you put that in there, the out of character(ooc) comments really take away from the story, and add that with spelling and grammar errors..well..it ruins it. Sorry to come off as harsh, but listen to your flaws and you'll get better.
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Reviewed By: youknowwho On: June 15, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, awesome. But I do have one 'con' to explain. Penis length. JESUS CHRIST, DUDE, DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG ELEVEN INCHES IS?!?!?!?! MY GOD!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 09:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Title: ANYONE ON? Im lonely
Reviewed By: Biggnasty On: July 03, 2004 00:19 CDT
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....no one is on to answer me calls....:( im all alone... i need someone to tell me some good waiting activites...Arrgh, this sucks. C'mOn lets see that 13th lemon:)...sigh...what to do what to do? I know!.....oh!...there goes my idea...damn this sucks...to me typing these letters is keeping my occupied......................WHERE IS EVERYONE?....Ohhhhh....it's 1:18 in the morning...i see....well that's not good...:'(
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Title: uhhh....
Reviewed By: Biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:47 CDT
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Sorry if i got carried away right now(check time and dates) just give the guy a break, he's only 14.....( and im only 13....) Critisize but don't insult is my final words....on this story....heh heh....
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Title: Rizu
Reviewed By: Biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:45 CDT
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Hey, no problem but critisizem is all part of trial and error. ( i think i spelled critisizem wrong)
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Title: to kit-sune rose
Reviewed By: biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:42 CDT
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I guess your right but Mr. Anoun is just being down-right gay. Critizing, yes i can deal with that but just being little gay man in the corner is being retard. i get your point tho. I have nothing against you:)
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Title: showstopper? read mine about mr. anoun
Reviewed By: biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:39 CDT
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Hey, you arent as harsh as mr. Anoun, but still c'mon. don't be gay like that:(. It's a damn fic man. Anything happens in stories
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Title: FUCK YOU MR. ANOUNIMOUS
Reviewed By: Biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:37 CDT
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WHAT THE HELL MAN?! IF YOU DONT LIKE HIS WORK THEN STOP READING DICK HEAD. And what the hell was that at the end? A little queer ass game of hide and seek? havent found me yet heehee. im a little fag that has nothing better to but suck my penis and critize other peoples work even tho...wait its comeing...IM A LITTLE FAGGOT! Like i said if you hate him GO THE FUCK AWAY! Havent found me yet? hmmmmm maybe cus im in my dads closet whacking off to his photos. Grow up man gees!
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Title: Niiiiiiice
Reviewed By: Biggnasty On: July 02, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice, a very good lemon. I noticed in my recent reviews.....they werent really reviews. Well ive been meaning to tell you that you never say "too" but instead "to". like when you use it in place of also you use "to". No biggie really and a couple other things i havent quite payed too much attention to. the story was great:D btw. Wow, this one has lots of reviews. I've noticed that the stories that have lots of reviews are the ones that don't have anyone other than the teen titans in them....no offense or anything, just pointing that out. You did ask for reviews so... Well anyways, hope your working on a star/raven lemon. Hmmm maybe you could start off with the end of the episode "Nevermore". Just giving pointers. That's all for now.
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Title: Whatever
Reviewed By: HSA2 On: June 10, 2004 15:34 CDT
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Ok, why don't you all just say I suck. But give me a friggin break on this one, it was my second lemon, this whole scenario did come to me in a dream.
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Reviewed By: Rizu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 19:28 CDT
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I'm sorry, but you have a long way to go before you really improve on your lemons. The whole commenting with stuff like "sweet I always wanted to do 69" and that thing about speed was just incredibly lame. I'm guessing you're still a virgin yourself? Not saying that's bad, but this writing just reminds me of something a 12-14 year old boy would write dreaming about this kind of stuff. I don't really agree with flaming to no ends, but honestly? Please try and improve your grammar, spelling, and storyline before you write another lemon. Hell, before you try to write anything...
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Title: Pretty Good Kid (or Adult)
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the spelling and grammer could have been better (but part of it is mediaminer.org's fault. Sorry Mediaminer people but it is true but it's not like I hate you guys or that! Okay?!) and you kinda got carried away with Robin and Starfire. I mean Robin, he wouldn't rape Star like that in the middle of the night (in fact, Robin wouldn't rape Star at all!) and Star wouldn't go and get revenge on Robin at all. Other than that, the story is good and you use your own creativity. Oh and I play Sonic 3D for the Sega Saturn, do ya have that game. I love the Jungle level because of the music! ^_^
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