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"Can't Help Myself:A Robin and Starfire Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ]
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 Title: to kit-sune rose
Reviewed By: biggnasty  On: July 02, 2004 23:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I guess your right but Mr. Anoun is just being down-right gay. Critizing, yes i can deal with that but just being little gay man in the corner is being retard. i get your point tho. I have nothing against you:)
 Title: showstopper? read mine about mr. anoun
Reviewed By: biggnasty  On: July 02, 2004 23:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, you arent as harsh as mr. Anoun, but still c'mon. don't be gay like that:(. It's a damn fic man. Anything happens in stories
 Title: FUCK YOU MR. ANOUNIMOUS
Reviewed By: Biggnasty  On: July 02, 2004 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE HELL MAN?! IF YOU DONT LIKE HIS WORK THEN STOP READING DICK HEAD. And what the hell was that at the end? A little queer ass game of hide and seek? havent found me yet heehee. im a little fag that has nothing better to but suck my penis and critize other peoples work even tho...wait its comeing...IM A LITTLE FAGGOT! Like i said if you hate him GO THE FUCK AWAY! Havent found me yet? hmmmmm maybe cus im in my dads closet whacking off to his photos. Grow up man gees!
 Title: Niiiiiiice
Reviewed By: Biggnasty  On: July 02, 2004 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice, a very good lemon. I noticed in my recent reviews.....they werent really reviews. Well ive been meaning to tell you that you never say "too" but instead "to". like when you use it in place of also you use "to". No biggie really and a couple other things i havent quite payed too much attention to. the story was great:D btw. Wow, this one has lots of reviews. I've noticed that the stories that have lots of reviews are the ones that don't have anyone other than the teen titans in them....no offense or anything, just pointing that out. You did ask for reviews so... Well anyways, hope your working on a star/raven lemon. Hmmm maybe you could start off with the end of the episode "Nevermore". Just giving pointers. That's all for now.
 Title: Whatever
Reviewed By: HSA2  On: June 10, 2004 15:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, why don't you all just say I suck. But give me a friggin break on this one, it was my second lemon, this whole scenario did come to me in a dream.
 Reviewed By: Rizu [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 09, 2004 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but you have a long way to go before you really improve on your lemons. The whole commenting with stuff like "sweet I always wanted to do 69" and that thing about speed was just incredibly lame. I'm guessing you're still a virgin yourself? Not saying that's bad, but this writing just reminds me of something a 12-14 year old boy would write dreaming about this kind of stuff. I don't really agree with flaming to no ends, but honestly? Please try and improve your grammar, spelling, and storyline before you write another lemon. Hell, before you try to write anything...
 Title: Pretty Good Kid (or Adult)
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 24, 2004 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well the spelling and grammer could have been better (but part of it is mediaminer.org's fault. Sorry Mediaminer people but it is true but it's not like I hate you guys or that! Okay?!) and you kinda got carried away with Robin and Starfire. I mean Robin, he wouldn't rape Star like that in the middle of the night (in fact, Robin wouldn't rape Star at all!) and Star wouldn't go and get revenge on Robin at all. Other than that, the story is good and you use your own creativity. Oh and I play Sonic 3D for the Sega Saturn, do ya have that game. I love the Jungle level because of the music! ^_^
 Title: AWSOME AS FUCK
Reviewed By: DrJ613  On: April 19, 2004 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was a great story all I found was 1 or 2 grammer errors but no one is perfect and I was looking for a fic just like this MORE P.S. always insert detailed oral it makes a good lemon better Oral = Blowjob :)
 Title: good
Reviewed By: Kitsune-rose  On: April 12, 2004 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like the story. But you need to calm all that mess down about people flaming you. People have every right to critisize what they do and do not like. So shut up!!!! Besides that, good job.
 Reviewed By: Showstopper (too lazy to sign in  On: April 05, 2004 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
First off, Robin would never mess with Starfire like that despite his urges to be with her because it's an invasion of her privacy to go into her room and do the things he did to her. It's tantamount to rape. You do have potential, I suggest you keep your sexual fantasies out of the fic with the narration. Have a good day, :)
 Reviewed By: Still haven't found me  On: April 05, 2004 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, you sure showed me. Oh, God, you can't be serious, right? You're going to be a pro-wrestler? And you're HAPPY about it? Do me the biggest of all favors and pull an Owen Hart on us. Only try to do it vertically.
 Title: Whatever
Reviewed By: HSA2  On: April 04, 2004 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, you can quit trying cuz no matter what you say or do I'm not gonna stop writeing. This is as much my passion as becoming a professional wrestler and no one, not even dickweeds like you can stop me.
 Title: I'll bet not
Reviewed By: Found me yet?  On: April 04, 2004 00:48 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Once again, you've managed to completely embarrass yourself. Again, horrific spelling. Grammar, still bad. Poorly put together, your ego once again manages to outshine its boundaries...you're as low as they get. Lines such as "sweet I always wanted to do 69" and "and I thought only I and Sonic the Hedgehog could achieve that kind of speed." My god, you're sickeningly full of yourself! You see, this is why I hate you! If you could deflate your head even a little, I would let you get away with it! Instead, you decide to be conceited enough to literally make me sick! I'm actually feeling queasy at this moment! I'm very aware that Striker gave away a few details. Pity...he was to be your next clue anyway. At least it got done faster that way. Well...you still haven't found me? What are you waiting for? I've already invited you. Now then...come find me, HyperSonicAsshole2.
 Reviewed By: YamiYaiba [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 13, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interresting....
 Title: Great Fic
Reviewed By: Runishie [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 29, 2004 17:00 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Veryy good firts one of your stories I read and just like to say it was the best I've read in a long time and I even told my friend to review but they aren't done reading it yet good story
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