| "One Good Turn" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: nanrz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. Favorite fanfic, no doubt. And its too awesome; too awesome for me to be able to review it right.
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Reviewed By: Polymer On: October 26, 2006 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe this didn't get more reviews. It's one of my favorites. It's like you really thought of everything - character development, interesting, plausible situation, even a little bit of suspense. Everything was EXCELLENT!
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Title: *imagines Ryo in those pants* *swoons*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew Dee had it in him!!!! And he stood up for their relationship while in character, which I think is totally in character to begin with. And I loved the way you wrote the "reward" scene, very tasteful while oh-so-yummy! ^_~
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Title: *imagines Ryo in those pants* *swoons*
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2005 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew Dee had it in him!!!! And he stood up for their relationship while in character, which I think is totally in character to begin with. And I loved the way you wrote the "reward" scene, very tasteful while oh-so-yummy! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Alaskan Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so adorable!! I love how you characterized Dee in this. I'm one of those people that happens to think that Dee does have some code of ethics and that he wouldn't have been blabbing about what went on between Ryo and himself when they're off duty. The love scene between them was also very well written. Even though it was more of the domination type, it was very tastefully done, not at all smutty, or over the top OC like some I have seen. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was fucking great!!! i absolutely LOVED it!!! nice job! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Lady Lunara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this. You did and AWESOME job, Ryo seems so sexy the way you portrayed him. Keep it up. I give it 2 thumps up. I'd give it more but I've only gots two hands. ^_^
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