| "We Share This Humble Path, Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: walkerminion On: August 24, 2004 02:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I utterly love this, and really hope that you'll continue it!!! It's beautifully written, and I particularly love the way you've written Tsuzuki; you've shown his angst, his intelligence *and* his fluffier side, and balanced it all so beautifully. I keep thinking about this story and wondering how Tsuzuki and Hisoka's relationship is going to develop from here... (*huge shipper, that's me*)... and the purple flowers thing makes me smile whenever I think about it. (Plus the thing about samurai arranging flowers. Is that true? What a mental image *that* is...)
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: Ardwynna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just took my breath away, really! The themes are so beautifully and skilfully layered. The emotion is tangible and the way you're developing the plot in a not-quite-linear fashion is intriguing. I thoroughly enjoy having to pull pieces together to draw conclusions myself. While this isn't the most difficult of these kinds of 'puzzle' fics, it's very enjoyable. I really enjoyed the first chapter. It was a look at Tsuzuki with more grace and intelligence than most people credit him with and it linked up so well with his actions in chapter three. Taking Hisoka's birth from the perspective of the servants, what a brilliant touch and the little garden scene...so sweet, funny and still touching. It was a wonderful touch of humor that was not just for humor's sake. This is just fantastic and I really want to see more of this story!
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Reviewed By: wouldntchaliketaknow On: May 10, 2004 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one. You have captured the characters feelings, and got me into it enough where I would love to read more. Very rare read, in my opinion
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Reviewed By: Wu On: April 10, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope this goes through this time. >.>
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Title: We Share This Humble Path, Alone:
Reviewed By: Wu On: April 10, 2004 00:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Break up your paragraphs just a hair more, but otherwise, it was pretty good. Keep it up.
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