| "Kagome and the Pirate Captain, The Silver Hanyou (old version)" Reviews/Comments [ 104 ] |
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 14:56 CDT
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I love this story. And while you may not have updated it in the past four years, I can't wait for when you do. Great job.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bawwwww thats it??? i was SOOOO getting into it!!!!! NOT FAIR!!! T-T
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Reviewed By: Inuyashafan234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 18:52 CST
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Very good dahling,but you should finish it.
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Title: lil hottie0206
Reviewed By: Lil Hottie0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:18 CST
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tell me if theres another version when you review my story the silver hanyou! THX!!!!!!!!!
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Title: lil hottie0206
Reviewed By: Lil Hottie0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:17 CST
Comment/Review:
oh and what do you mean when you said old version is there an other version?
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Title: lil hottie0206
Reviewed By: Lil Hottie0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 19:14 CST
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ok i read this story a while ago and it was wonderful!!!! i loved how you made hate each other at first and then they couldnt stand being away from each other you are so romantic with your storys. plz read my new story The Silver Hanyou. i no it sounds like yours but i think its diffrent. man i think i feel like reading this story again! luv, Lil Hottie0206
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Title: Chapt. 17
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Chapt. 17
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Greensville [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thx for the story it was great but it fels like you could continue with it and i wish you do but it it is up to you and thx again for the story ^_^
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Reviewed By: canongal102 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 17:14 CDT
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AARRGGGHH!!!!*pulls out hair* y do u get us addicted and then forget about it!?! this is SUCH a good fanfic! it does not deserve this abuse!!!! *pout*
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Reviewed By: anime is inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 10:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very interesting story so far.
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Reviewed By: piper_prue_paigep3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
i blove it but you NEED to finish it PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Title: wowee!!!
Reviewed By: raven watson [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 01:43 CDT
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haha sorry, i don't think i've ever actually said 'wowee' so i thought i'd use it now. haha. Ok, on with the review. I love sappy love stories! and this one is awesome! hehehe. I liked your lemonlime, it was a tasteful expression of intimate love. I do admit that i thought it was cheesy, but i was grinning like a madwoman the whole time. aah, the affects of love upon the soul... anyway. I really like this story and hope that you update soon so i can love it some more! in a completely platonic way of course. In a technical review i must say there are quite a few instances of mistakes like he instead of her or she, simple things that aren't that big of a deal, but it's a review right? either way.... i can't wait for the next 5-7 chapters! woot woot!
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Title: Sakura Samora
Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 17:15 CDT
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You say this version and the title says old version, so wheres the new one?
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Title: i love this one and.....
Reviewed By: Cassandra_Huskey [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this Story specully when Inuyasha got shot at the fireline that part made me cry. I need to ask a question I'm on of a inuyasha Fan fiction too here and how do u do that bottom part there in your stories Sailor X huh?
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Title: Kagome&the Pirate Captain
Reviewed By: kittymeow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was.....interesting, but good, really good.
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Reviewed By: Mooney01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 09:57 CDT
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hey Sailor X damn u, damn u, DAMN U! but oh well i knew it would happen, just not with kagome present. -Starx_X
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Dreaming Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! DAT STORY WAS SO GOOD! WHEN YOU FINISH PLEASE LET ME KNOW I LUV YOUR OTHER STORY LETTERS ALSO BUT U COULDV'E HAD A BETTA ENDING BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD I LEAVE U 10 KUDOS
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Title: OMG!!
Reviewed By: Dreaming Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! DAT STORY WAS SO GOOD! WHEN YOU FINISH PLEASE LET ME KNOW I LUV YOUR OTHER STORY LETTERS ALSO BUT U COULDV'E HAD A BETTA ENDING BUT IT WAS STILL GOOD I LEAVE U 10 KUDOS
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Reviewed By: piper_prue_paigep3 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to put up the sequal I have been waiting for years!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I haven't read a story this good in a long time! I wish you would have finished but *sigh* oh well. I love InuYasha X Kagome romances! I just can't get enough of them!
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 03:15 CDT
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i aboslutely love it so far. i've read all 22 chapters and hope you re-post the newer version asap. i can't wait to see what happens next. in the mean time, ill go check out those other ones u wrote.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooo such a great story and its been 3 years. 3 YEARS! how can you DO this to us! an amzing story such as this one should not go un updated for so long. please dont abondon this fic. its sooo good. please please please udpate soon i really want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 20:10 CDT
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Can you give me the link too, pwetty pwease? email is kitty_kat_8@myway.com. Thanks! ☺
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Reviewed By: frost angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 00:47 CDT
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i love this story!!!! it's so awesome and interesting, but it could all be better if you UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!lol jk, it's already really good, but just one question. Did you write the second part of this story yet, if so plz add it to this one or post somewhere where i can read it, if you didn't write it then oh well, i gess i'll keep pestering you until you do write it.
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Reviewed By: ThirdDemonKags [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 23:21 CDT
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u said this is the old version....could you link me the new one??? my e-mail is flutter_by_8@yahoo.com
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Title: Whoot!
Reviewed By: sincerely___mimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 16:56 CST
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I absolutely love the story so far < 3. But, one thing you might want to watch out on, is grammar when you use other languages. It would be La Isla De Quatro Almas, not Del. xD Sorry if I'm being nitpicky, but it's just a suggestion. Other than that, it's excellent. Keep up the good work!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: crazywiccananimefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 13:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was cool and awsome you rock. but when r u going 2 load the second part on www.fanfiction.net? im going crazy without it :( but still u rock ;)!
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Title: I loved it!
Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! u did great!!!!!!!!!! When will you finish this story? I'm dieing to finish it! This was the first fanfic i read here!
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Reviewed By: Dragonslayer8 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello, i am Dragonslayer8 and you should go on www.daadaadaa.com more often. THIS STORY ROX!
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