| "Pale Moonlight" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Her [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
god damn it, ya only let MM meber review, i pissed w/ MM so plz change tht, ^^ & cute fic, i liekd it a lot & just made me go awww a lot! lol ^^
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Reviewed By: bloody_black_valentine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 02:39 CST
Comment/Review:
aww, cute ^^ but if ya read wite a next chpt (which u better b/c i will hunt u down &....... 2 far? ^^ lol) so um anywayyyyyy, lol(damn im percky 2nite O.o) can u switch places plzzzz, yeah im prev, get used 2 it ;), no! im NOT hiting on ! sry i dont play tht way! lmao*
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Title: Keep it up
Reviewed By: Fallen_Angel_Of_Darkness On: July 05, 2005 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
In all honesty it's hard to say if you should keep it up with the fic or not. I could have another chapter but that chapter can't really have a plot or nothing because the main theme in the first chapter is just of Yuki being nice to Suichi and sex. The next chapter would have to be something along the lines of the marrage or something. I don't see a point of another chapter as this fic is well enough as a one-shot and has great creative idea. I should be going though, talk to you latter and keep writting
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: GinjiLuvsBan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I LOVED IT. IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO KAWAII, please write more *watery eyes* BTW with my friends i'm Ryu ^^ but OMG i loved it ^^
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Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More More More!! Please!!! It was really good! Pleas continue to write these things will you? Thank You for putting this up here!!
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