| "Demon Choices" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: sraven On: September 09, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but the format makes it hard to read.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 01:27 CDT
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I just read the last chapter! Rin is really starting to grate on my nerves! What is this issue she has with Kagome? She didn't even know that Sesshoumaru existed when Inuyasha cut off his arm. I understand that she didn't like to see him injured but Inuyasha was defending himself and protecting Kagome, if Sesshoumaru has let it go then she should too. She is very arrogant, jealous, and conceded. Not only for herself but for Sesshoumaru as well, she puts him up on a pedestal saying he saved Inuyasha and gave Inuyasha and Kagome everything they have. I really hope this issue comes out more is addressed, whether it be by a argument with Kagome or if Sess has to set her straight. It's like she can't see passed the end of his nose. She's so wraped up in being dovted to him that she's lost all sense of being civil to others. I don't see how Kagome can stand it. And I love the lemons that are placed here and there throughout the story. Besides the whole paragraph thing I noticed that some words are running together but a spelling mistake was rare, so rare in fact that I wasn't sure if one was a spelling mistake when I saw it ^_^. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~huggles you~ I'm so happy you updated, you have no idea how happy!!!!!!! But are you having tech problems with the site? Your chapters use to be in paragraphs but now it's all in one big block and that's kind of hard to read because it's hard to keep your place without getting distracted with all the other words because they're so close together. I love the way the plot is starting to unfold more! You have to update soon, it's like I'm addicited!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 07:41 CDT
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Please update soon! This story is far to good to be left undfinished.
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Title: SUGOI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Eyoko On: August 23, 2005 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[hugs you dearly] I chanced upon Demon Nature, followed by Demon Choices back in Feb '05. I must say... I LOVE IT!!!!! It's 1 of the best AU stories I've read, along w/Regenerist (AFF/FF.net). I'm REALLY glad it was recently updated. Hope everything is going good for you! ^_^ Can't wait for more chapters! =X Oyasumi Nasai!! *^_^* --Lucky
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Reviewed By: sraven7278 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I spent hours reading it, much to my husband's annoyance. I couldn't stop reading until I was done. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: GreaterBeast On: April 24, 2005 20:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon. Also your website is down i hope you put it back up.
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Reviewed By: bad kittie On: October 19, 2004 17:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything you have written-I read-fortunately for me it is always an anime/manga series I like. My only complaint? That the 'real world' interferes with our writing-so I wish you had time to update and write more-but whatever and whenever you update it is always worth the wait- Personally, I would love to beta for you (hint)- Until then, I look forward to the next installments-
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: August 01, 2004 06:01 CDT
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So great to read the start of a exciting new story hoping for good things from this sequel to a story I have reread many times at another site.Just found out it was here and found Deamon choices waiting for me.Will be comming back for more ,count on it.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I've said it before but just for good measure, Taisho is a whore. I mean really, how many women has he been with??? But anyway I'm so glad your updating!!!! *does happy dance* And I'm hoping you're going to explain how and why Sakura is mated to Kouga??? Or maybe I just missed that in the last half of the story??? These two chapters have been amazing!!!! But I', still looking for Kagome to pop up. Anyway please update soon!!!!!!
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