| "Risque" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] | | Pages (4): [ 1 2 3 4 › » ] | Title: Nice~~
Reviewed By: Fireheart125 On: February 22, 2009 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This tory is by far one of the best comical SasuNaru stories i've read~!!! Keep up the great work!! :D
| Title: Huh, I thought I had reviewed earlier....
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 19, 2009 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As my title states, I thought I had reviewed earlier ^^' Sorry about that! Well written and terribly funny, Jiria *sp?* and Kakashi make an evil duo lol. This was very fun to read, I like sexually fustreated Sasuke and Kyubia *sp?*. Sorry im too lazy to look up how the names are spelt, life tends to catch up with me VERY quickly...I do hope you find time to update soon cause I think im going to have to reread the whole story over :p So until then heres' waiting for the next update!
| Title: Risque
Reviewed By: Roxs On: October 30, 2008 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this, it's all funny and torcherous to Sasake, lol. Well get on with it, i wanna know more Great Fic, I love it!
| Reviewed By: Dragonwolf On: March 18, 2008 10:38 CDT
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Wow you gave me so much fun with reading this fic. Was laughing my ass off when I realized that Naruto had the uchiha-symbol as a tatoo! That just cracked me up! *evil laugh* And you're so mean to Sasuke! But then you started messing with Naruto's head as well. Made it much more fun. And *gasp* Fuzzy-eyebrows doesn't have eyebrows anymore! I hope you haven't given up on this one, cause I really find it funny. I will check from time to time just in case of an update. *wink*
| Reviewed By: taalibba320 On: July 16, 2007 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best Sasunaru fics I've ever read. First thing I thought when I read about the edible undies - those are totally ramen-flavored XD. 120 condoms+small bottle of lube? :( You make kitty scared! Poor Naruto! This reminds me of that equation for how much lube...uh, never mind... I hope Sasuke figures out that he'll need to stock up. Mad!love for that Uchiha tattoo. Totally reminded me of one of my favorite Naruto pics: http://community.livejournal.com/rahly_furverted/8364.html NWS, btw. I like how Sasuke can't decide if he likes Naruto's tat or not... even though he totally does XD. I love how everyone keeps being entranced by the nipple ring. I especially loved the "Sasuke, it said, touch me," bit and the RAVISH ME cookies. I adore the wee bitty smutlet at the beginning of some of the chapters. It's a nice glimpse into Sasuke's head without the annoying mental exposition of "and then I'm going to XXX and XXX after I get a hold of him!" He comes across a lot more passionately for it, which makes him hotter. Also, it's a nice appetizer while waiting for the main course XD. (Yeah, I'm a total perv >.>) I like how you don't have Sasuke too OOC. Like, this is quite excellent for the fandom. He's not all "Oh, Naruto, how I love thee!" but he's still thinking about him and wanting to spend time with him in a way that makes sense for his character (the whole, dicussing what had happened while the other was away was cute). Please don't lose this. I've read some pretty excellent fiction that made my eyeballs practically fall out onto the screen because a previously "good" Sasuke suddenly became quite vocally affectionate (in front of the whole student body - yes, I've read high school fic, I'm not proud, but at least I'm honest :: sniffle :: ). You have occasional spelling mistakes (and really odd, random inserts of accented letters - but that may be a problem with the site or something, dunno), but it was more of a problem in the last chapter, which I think you noted as being un-betaed. Small nitpick that drives me nuts now that I know how it's supposed to go, "blond" is for men and "blonde" is for women. I think I saw both in your story, so you might even know this already but just typed it in wrong or something. Not a big deal for your average reader, I'm just terribly twitchy that way. I really loved that you didn't have Sasuke or Naruto flipping out because "the village (people :: snerk :: ) think that teh gay is WRONG!" I can see how that'd be a legitimate hurdle to overcome but it's terrible overdone. The whole "we're friends and I don't want to lose that" is much more interesting. That, and it wouldn't have made much sense considering how many people are pushing this relationship XD. Yes, occasionally the story isn't a laugh a minute, but it's really funny as a whole and those other bits are totally necessary. My all time favorite fic "Draco Malfoy, the Amazing Bouncing... Rat?" has a fun:necessary bits ratio similar to this one so don't worry about it. This is exactly the sort of fic that I'd like to see more of in the Naruto fandom. You seem busy, but I sincerely hope RL gives you enough breathing room in the future to finish this fic (and totally write more fics XD). - S (Usually I don't write reviews this long but it's way entertaining to watch the "characters left" number decrease XD. Why yes, I *am* easily entertained. Why do you ask?)
| Reviewed By: Spikerix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all: PLEASE DO NOT PUT "COMPLETE" ON YOUR FIC'S STATUS WHEN IT'S STILL A WIP!! I don't know if you did it on purpose trying to catch readers that only read those (like me) or if it was a mistake, but I suggest you to fix it if only to respect those readers and avoid future indignations. Now on the review: What a grand entertainment this was! I laughed my head off constantly, it's been a long time since I've read a comedy. I like your humor and most of the plot, though I think some points need to be worked on; like Naruto's denial, it was fun and comprehensible at the beginning and now not only lacks credit but it's getting increasingly annoying; there were some parts of the story that would've been very interesting to know in detail, like Naruto and Sasuke inebriation (I would have loved to see that ::sighs::). On the other hand I loved Sasuke's dreams ::drools:: and now I'm frustrated cause I still don't know what his damn tattoo is about (I hoped I'd found out on the "last" chapter, the 10th...); the SasuNaru situations were HOT! Every one of them, I shiver all over thinking about them finally doing it, I'm sure you'll make it awesome; Neji's reaction was hilarious, can't wait to see if you have plans in store for him. Overall, I enjoyed this story very much, despite the lack of closure (the reason I don't read WIPs except for a very few exceptions) and I hope to see much more of it. You have my support and congratulations! Kisses from Argentina ::smooch::
| Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 16:32 CDT
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I love it this is really well written but please dont take to long to update again.
| Title: Um hey
Reviewed By: greentresses [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 12:04 CDT
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Um hey there! So any way it's been awhile since I've read this story and I really want to slap myself for negleting it so much, especially since I forgot how hysterically funny it all is. What with Jiraiya's and Kakashi's teasing and our two main stars (sauke and naruto) going back and forth playing this game and several other things, yeah this is what more stories should be like. FUN.
| Reviewed By: Eddy-chan On: April 18, 2007 22:55 CDT
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yay i love it but you must update or DIE, please!!!
| Title: Blurrp?
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 14:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I think I reviewed this on FF.net...but I can't remember.. ^..^ Ah well, here's an extra review.. *purrr* Loverly, this is wonderfully written, adn I can't wait till the next chapter comes out and we see what Sasuke does to Naruto next. *evil snickers* Or maybe Naruto will be the one doing something.... *overly large evil smile* Update as soon as you can..I'm off to read the parody thingy made by your friend... Ja Ne, Zirra ^..^
| Reviewed By: Narutoobsession On: December 17, 2006 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaaaaaaaaase update soon! I totally love your story!
| Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:31 CST
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you story is great so update soon pleeeeaase!!!
| Reviewed By: LemonsLuver On: October 03, 2006 19:04 CDT
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OMG WTH DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING.....??????? PLz don't leave this story hanging. It was getting just at that point where Naruto might want Sasuke as much as Sasuke wanted Naruto!!!!!!!1 PWEEZE continue this story.. I want to read more.
| Title: Awsome
Reviewed By: VenusIsKnownForFlyTraps [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it, loved it, loved it! This one of my top 5 favorite series/stories.
| Reviewed By: Nomistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 21:38 CDT
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lol. Nevermind my last comment. I love this story though.
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