| "(The New) Lupin the Third Series" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: Topaz_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job this is a really cool story! I like the originality! I've never actually read a story where the girl who falls i love with the bishi gets married to him and has kids O_O very creative! now for the crits l_l The chapters are a little short and just a smidge choppy. And the grammar is also a litle ehhhh you know? And the last crit for the day you have Jigan and Goemon out of character a lot O_O Sorry but I can't help point out these things! Overall though this is a good read very funny and it kept me occupied ^_^ I really can't wait for an update soo hurry up with the next chapter!! you left me with a cliffy **dies** +_+
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: bayougalkc [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GOOD JOB!!!!!!!! ILIKE, I LOVE, I WANT SOME MORE OF IT! SO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SINCERLY, YOUR BESTEST FRIEND, BABY KAY
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