| "First Aid" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Cute
Reviewed By: seraphim_queen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, it really captured the akwardness of hte 2. Kudos to you.*bows*
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Reviewed By: LaLa13 (nsi) On: August 06, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So very satisfying... *sighs* I loved it. The last line just added the cherry to the ice cream, so to say. Very nicely written. I've never actually meant it when I gave someone all 10's, until now. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: Man Called True [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but better than most of the "marathon" fics I've found. You not only nailed the characters but you nailed how they act to each other. Very good.
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this one! It's just too cute! Interpersonal sparring between these two can be tricky at best and boring at worst. This has it down rather well. I especially loved the ending bit about the lie. :) Keep it up!
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