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| "Under The Same Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 15:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey there!!! Your story sounds fabulous, honestly, I just got around to reading it!!! I'll email you on the details of what we discussed, but as for so far? Very good! Some minor spelling errors and grammar kinks, but nothing that can't be fixed with a little proof reading! If memory suits me, Celena isn't really elaborated in the series, right? Because she was Dilandau and all that jazz?? But, your coming along nicely, establishing her character. I look forward to reading more! Cheers! ~Jesachi
| Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Pahhur [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2005 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have a good method of establishing the character in this chapter. You made what on the outside would be a flat character very 3-Dimensional. Now, the Author's Note at the bottom can be gotten rid of. AS for the grammer and spelling errors, you should go to the Beta-Pre-Reading Thread. Based off the first chapter that's all I can give you. Good Luck and keep submitting to FFARG.
| Reviewed By: TaraNorth On: January 31, 2005 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fiction! I'm not familiar with the characters, but the female lead has me interested so far. And you say that English isn't your first language? I dare say that you write better than most authors who only speak english! Looking forward to updates!
| Reviewed By: Swan On: January 25, 2005 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
well i read ur story at fanfic...and it was good... hope u update soo and keep writing..
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