| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Duobat218 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2001 20:38 CST
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Damn you and your suspense!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT THE NEXT PART IS!! IS IT ONE OF THOSE HUNTY THINGS????? AWW COME ON! TELL ME! TELL ME! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 03, 2001 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so exiting. You have so much talent that I'm licking my lips waiting for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2001 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! As usual. ;) You're truly a great author...but I'm a little mad at you for not notifying me this chapter was out! *Shame, shame*. I do think this is a wonderful fic, so keep it up, please!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 26, 2001 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is totally exciting! PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON! |
Reviewed By: celeste jacobs On: October 29, 2001 17:31 CST
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I love your story and I hope you continue it. You have a knack for writing and I'm hooked on every word. Keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: cha On: October 29, 2001 22:01 CST
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I love this story!! Can't wait for the next chapter I'm absolutely hooked!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 09, 2001 15:31 CST
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Wow this is a great story and you certainly have a knack for writing. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Karla On: November 09, 2001 16:41 CST
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*grabs Ember and starts to shake her* I need more!!! More, damn it!
*fall down and goes into Ember-fic withdrawal*
Heeheehee.... |
Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker On: November 12, 2001 01:08 CST
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I'm interested in the idea of the mating ritual, and intrigued enough to want to know what it is. I am confused about something from the second chapter though - first you had King Vegeta say he didn't want the people to see how weak their future king was, then you had him say to Vegeta that he was unbelievably strong. That contradicts itself, and I wasn't sure what direction you really wanted it to be.
Otherwise the fic is very good. Now I'm going to read the 3rd chapter that you put up. :-) |
Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker On: November 12, 2001 01:27 CST
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That's really mean of Vegeta, to make her give a speech without preparation. I think if I were Bulma, I'd have killed him. :-) But then, as you said, the sex is definitely worth it.... ;-)
I loved it when he said "I'd hate to have to kill you after I got this working properly," and then she said that death threats turned her on! That was such a crack up! ^_^ You're good with those little battles between them. |
Reviewed By: hibari_heza On: November 13, 2001 01:00 CST
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This was another great chapter. I'll hope that you have another update soon. ^_^ Until then I'll just sit around here and wait impatiently. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Jade On: November 19, 2001 16:41 CST
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Aside from everything I told you on AIM, I have to say this story is nothing short of amazing! I say as long as you have the ideas, keep 'em coming! Your talent is incredible and I absolutely LOVE the story! |
Reviewed By: Molly chan On: November 19, 2001 17:25 CST
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Finissssssssh? Please? SOON? At least post........... ^^; Good!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 19, 2001 18:08 CST
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This chapter has definitely set the stage for what's to come. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee On: February 13, 2002 05:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the plot. This story is absolutely amazing. I hope you continue and update soon. |
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