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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 17, 2005 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! As awesome as always! Please keep going and update soon! I'm glad they're gonna take the controller away.
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Title: the price the paid
Reviewed By: anissa32 On: June 11, 2005 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! I really enjoyed this chapter update! It was such a treat to see the boys finally together again. I really enjoy watching them interact together as they are thinking about what to do with their lives and if they will even be allowed to live in peace. But, poor Heero! Dr. J. was just simply evil to implant a device like this inside of a child! I'm just glad that they were able to remove it and it looks like this will serve as some ammuniton for the guys that will help their case overall. Thanks for another awesoms chapter and I am looking forward to reading more again soon.
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Reviewed By: Gwfan_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 14:03 CDT
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Cool keep writing this story its a good, i like it
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Title: series so far
Reviewed By: Rochan01 On: May 21, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am really enjoying following your fic as it develops. I think you are doing a nice job showing the evolution of Heero's personality and his handling of human interaction as well as WHY he is changing. Not just because of "better environment" (doubtful in this situation) or counseling which with his training I think would not have much effect, but because Duo gave him advice, and Heero himself has a goal to achieve. I am also enjoying your contrasting how the public perceives the "fearsome Gundam Pilot" image vs how they see and behave towards the "typical teenage boys" they believe the boys to be. (And that they are pretending to be - nice job with Heero, pretending to be sweet and cute and dutiful, a poor young boy screwed by the system). I like that you brought the judge back into it too so we see he is not a monster with a grudge, but a misled person who thought he was doing the right thing. It is too easy to make your opposing factors into heartless villains but you didn't take the easy way out. I am glad you got to the "Doctors as Commanding Officers" part because that was really bugging me all along.
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 11:18 CDT
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I'm not one who normally reads yoai, but this is really good. Duo doing community service, Heero doing work in the same place as Duo... all of it was well written and flowed together nicely. Keep it up. Get the next chapter posted ASAP.
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Title: Community Service
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 22:27 CDT
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Whew - lots going on in this chapter! I'm glad Duo stuck to his guns. The poor kid is constantly fighting himself and this time it seems to have paid off. It didn't hurt that the judge wasn't afraid to look outside the box and take action. For awhile I was afraid Heero and Duo would miss each other all day. What a bittersweet reunion - loved the hughuddle! Not sure if Heero will get an Oscar nod for that little acting job, but kudos to the kid for knowing when to milk it, huh? I got a little lost at the beginning of the robbery scene, but once the kids got organized, it flowed much better. You had lots of characters to keep track of, and I think you did a nice job of keeping their personalities and quirks straight. Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 11, 2005 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was an amazing and long chapter! Go you! Please update as soon as possible. It's really good and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm glad Duo and Heero finally got to see each other again, but I wish they would have gotten more quality time.
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Title: Track and Field
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 22:33 CDT
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I'm always a sucker for seeing the good guys one-up the jerks, and this chapter gave it to 'em by the buckets full. There are some interesting options for the boys, it's good to see that they're taking a proactive approach and not just sitting around marking the days off on a calendar. It would be nice if the scape goat idea works. I loved the "teamwork" course; Wufei can sure put you in your place with a few choice words, huh? I wonder how long the lesson will stick though... A nervous Heero - too cute! I'm nervous about him working with adults, though (even if he runs circles around them!) So, what does Quatre have up his sleeve now? I take it he set that all up?
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! They'll be together again! This was a cool and sweet chapter and I hope you update soon cause I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 19:58 CDT
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Finally the soccer jerks got what they were asking for! And Heero is getting more talkitive by the minute. Wow. He even get to cut grass with a scythe, wish I could, gotta love hacking things to pieces :). P.S. Update ASAP, or I shall hunt you down with my very own scythe, Muahaha. I'm feeling evil all of a sudden.
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Reviewed By: Rude02(notsignedin) On: April 27, 2005 19:34 CDT
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Yep... That was good strategy alover the place! Wu tricking his way into Heero's pen (even if the dufus forgot about the list), Duo getting rid of that moron principal at school! Most admit I tought he was gonna get locked up for the MS stunt. Goody!
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 14:24 CDT
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Poor Duo. He's having such a hard time, and all he wants to do is see Heero. And Heero, he needs to be a little more careful with hiding his identity, people are getting suspicious.Well, keep up the good work and update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: dk_joy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was great! Please keep going! There was nothing wrong with it. I like that you made Duo and Heero go through the same kind of things. I can't believe more people haven't reviewed this. It really is an awesome fic (if my opinion counts for anything).
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Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2005 13:31 CDT
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Must have more. Heero taking the blame for poor Pete is so heroic! (hehe bad pun) But he certainly got the best of that bastard Clark. Keep going, it's getting better by the chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rude02 _not signed in On: April 10, 2005 20:55 CDT
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AaaUch! Nice development, I like it! Wonder what will become of Heero after a year... so far, so interesting... check for typos, you got a few.
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