Title: hey, great story!
Reviewed By: Just an Honest Reviewer On: May 26, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all this was a very nice fiction! I loved the way it was put into Sango's point of view! Bravo! Style of Writing: 9 I gave you a 9 because it would help alot if you used paragraph forms. Many authors refuse to because it is easier to write without it, but using paragraph form makes the story look more attractive and less confusing. Spelling & Grammer: 8 On this I gave you an 8 because in some parts of the story your tenses were messed up. Also for a few typos and the mispelling or Kirara. (I spelled it 'kilala' when I started watching Inu Yasha, everyone does it!) Everything else: 10 I thought you were extremely creative and i completely enjoyed reading this ficlit! Overall rating was a 10 as well because I really like this fic!
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