| "Eternity of lust" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: awesome
Reviewed By: narutofan1000 On: July 31, 2009 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should make another tsunade and shizuna
| Title: it was alright
Reviewed By: razile [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was alright, but a bit too short, also it didn't really do as well as some of the others becuase the others probally had some comedy factor in it, making it fun to read, also Shizune's longing for her master wasn't played out as well as it could have. regardless of these facts, its enjoyable and good. well done.
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