| "A Risk Worth Taking" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 00:59 CDT
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i really like it but one thing u need to work on is how many typos you have. most of the time it's not something u can fix with spell check but just mistakes like putting a the instead of she. but other than that, keep writing it's great.
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Reviewed By: jadeangeloo On: February 27, 2006 20:09 CST
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Don't worry about it. I know how you feel, my computer has been broken since July (Thank god for my uncle's computer! He doesn't care that I use it all day) and I really want the information off of it.... >.< I started writing a really awesome story that I never backed up, as well as older stuff that I don't have because of the first time Animespiral crashed.... anyway though, take whatever time you need. ^_^ I respect you for not abandoning the story. And I hope you're ok
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Reviewed By: Sonyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there, this is an awsome story i love it i can't wait for the next chapter. plz update soon. Ja Ne =^_^=
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 10:51 CST
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ohhh thats bad well i hope that every thangs ok now. and i am willing to what for long piriods of time so please take as mutch time as you need i wll still be hear
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 12:47 CST
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just giving you a little reminder to continue. i do want to read more of this story you know
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Reviewed By: Kassie Jo On: November 27, 2005 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Like your Story . Cant wait to read More
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhh an other chapter i loved it as usaule. i can berly wate for the update.please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: jadeangeloo On: September 19, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice song choice, I love "Ugly". This was a good chapter. If I was in Kaemon's situation i would've freaked out and stood up there like a deer in headlights..... o.o anymawho, great chapter, update as soon as possible. 100000000000/10
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just leting you know that i am still hear..... wating.....
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
......nice...... i loved this last chapter as useuel i can berly wate for the next one
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Reviewed By: jadeangeloo On: August 18, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Awww, so cute. Meh, summer went way too fast, I agree. I don't go back til Sep 6th though... (we got out later) T-T I want to be lazy, I don't want to learn and have stress and drama. Wah.... Well, at least now I'll actually have an excuse for not updating... ^^* Great story, i loved this chapter. 100000000/10
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats ok i loved this chapter to i can berly wate for the next one. this is atuely one of the few origenal storys that i read. so i realy enjoy it.
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Reviewed By: jadeangeloo On: August 03, 2005 09:26 CDT
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Oooh.... suspenseful. I'm more intrigued now..... Great chapter, update soon. 1000000000/10
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im back and i love it more than i did before please update soon i can berly wate for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: me On: July 18, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a good story, u should really work on the grammer and spelling(not taht i chould be talkin) keep writing more chapters and shit so ur story is longer and stuff yea w/e later skater
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