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| "Weapon of Mass Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 175 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Reviewed By: Okami_Kitakazeno [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 15:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sir, I too extend to you a high-five of brotherhood. You are the first to go with the concept of Keitaro getting to cash in on his karma and maintain an acceptable level of quality. I applaud you, and hope you keep up the good work! p.s.: Oh, and I highly recommend you read the Love Hina manga the first chance you get. The anime is alright, but the manga is far superior. Though, that's just my twenty yen. Ja matta, ~Okami
| Title: GAH
Reviewed By: GenocideHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 03:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Disregard my review below. I messed up with teh login -_- Damn MediaMiner redirected me here... -_-
| Title: sweet!
Reviewed By: anon2 On: July 06, 2006 00:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great to see an update to this fantastic fic! when adultfanfics went down I almost cried. took some doing but I found this place and I can watch the rest of this great story unfold. still no footplay, tho. ;p Mutsumi and Motoko are the 2 hottest girls in the series and no one deserves Kei's love more (Shinobu being a very close 3rd only because Mutsumi knew him longer and her age puts her out of a serious running). I'm glad Naru's getting what she deserves, but even if only for the sake of Mutsumi's happiness, she "cums" around. Keep writing, friend!
| Title: WOW
Reviewed By: DeronsDemonGurl On: July 05, 2006 18:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is awesome, I love it. I hope you update soon, it is so awesome, I don't know what I would do wit out it.
| Reviewed By: Lieutenant Mike Powell III On: June 28, 2006 17:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell of a job, soldier! This is simply put, one of the most kick-ass, hottest hentai LH fic I've EVER read! Man, this is FUCKIN' AWESOME! Soldier, you've made this old marine, a very happy man. Soldier, I just LOVE how you've bashed Naru! Hoo-rrah! She's finally GETTING IT! Soldier, Mo-chan and Mutsu-chan? Man! THAT kicked ass! Outstanding work, son! Now, let's see what sick, kick-ass perverted shit you're gonna put up! Hoo-rrah! Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 16:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Nice job, loved it.
| Reviewed By: someoneelse On: June 24, 2006 22:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thanks for the chapt. looking forward to more and more
| Title: Dammmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnn
Reviewed By: !!!!!! On: June 24, 2006 20:34 PDT
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Damnnnnnnnnnnnnn. You updated quick. Now this is what I'm talikn about! Long chapters and frequent updates!
| Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 07:31 PDT
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Good to have a new chapter up. :) Lots of good stuff here, sex, character development, some necessary plot links, sex...and did I mention sex? :) The development between Motoko and Mutsumi was refreshing and bodes well for future hook-ups. Ah, Naru...I can see some interesting possibilities there, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: On: June 24, 2006 05:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great Story : I love it. I hope we will soon see Kaolla and Shinobu lost their flowers. It will be fun to see Mitsune "discover" Keitaro sleeping with Motoko and Mutsumi. I hope that you 'll update soon. Légion, a French reader.
| Reviewed By: GenocideHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 05:26 PDT
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Good job, man. I still don't much care for Naru, but hey, your fic. I'm more interested in Shinobu and Su's turn. Hehehehehe... Keep it up. And please don't leave us high and dry this long again.
| Reviewed By: Psychlone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 21:58 PDT
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A great chapter, very lemony...gotta get those citruse juices flowing. I difinintly love Motoko, and it is great Naru got put in her place, she needs adjustment, even if her father was a prick or w/e. That's no excuse in my book. But otherwise, like the lesbian shinobu and Su...great touch.
| Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 20:33 PDT
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Alright, I'ma little bit more active now *tries to hide the seven empty cups of coffee behind him* So, let's put my review into better format. First things first, I'm loving the Shinobu and Su thing, so much, I built that *points to a state of you, with the plaque, god of Love Hina Hentai Faniction on it* Plus a see your starting the fondations of "Let's all share Keitaro so we can ALL jump his bone, okay?", very clever the way you did it to. Naru is getting a rough time, I say she derserves it just a bit though, If she wasn't Keitaro's "promise Girl" I wouldn't ever support the couple myself, Naru is simple to mean to him. Sure, she has her moments, but she's mostly mean to him on a regular basis. Loved the scene with Kit. No more wrath for you, least from me, others might, but no more from me, you've earned it *holds up a "I'm immune to EmperorJaden's wrath, yay for me!" badge, and sends it to you in inter-dimensional mail* be sure to update soon! Signed, Empero Jaden
| Reviewed By: EmperorJaden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 19:04 PDT
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Wel, it's about time you updated. good update. Kinda tired write now, so I'll thearthen you with wrath later.
| Reviewed By: egg_affnomore On: June 12, 2006 04:42 PDT
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MOAR PLZ. (Heh, I've gotta lay off the 4chan.) Seriously, it's good seeing WMD updated, but man, what a tease! Please give us all the rest of chapter 9 soon!
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