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| "No-Nos of DBZ FanFiction!" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: k-doggg On: May 08, 2011 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL I THINK THIS EVERY TIME I READ I BULMA+VEGETA FAN FICTION I HATE SEEING HIM PLAYED OF LOVEY DOVEY. TOTALLY LOVE THIS I HOPE A DBZ AUTHORS READ THIS. I'VE WRITTEN FANFICS TO AND AM TOTALLY NOT OFFENDED I HONESTLY BELIEVE ONLY PPL WHO HAVE WRITTEN STORIES LIKE THIS ARE OFFENDED. LOVVVE IT!!! POST MORE | Reviewed By: CJ On: April 24, 2011 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for making me laugh my ass off^^ I was crazy about dragonball when I was a kid (I'm now 17) and since I have holidays right now I read some V/B-facfics... and you were head on about most of them! Especially about the mating and biting and all... aren't they stealing from those vampire-stories that are so popular at the moment? You're German, right? (Cuz' of the German dub u mentioned...) Well I'm German, too.^^ and I know what you mean about creativity! I don't know if it's the same with the English dub but I just love how in RTL2 version they always say stuff like "heiliges Kanonenrohr" or "da brat mir doch einer nen Storch" or (Kuririn/Krillin says that once "deinem Vater ist wohl wirklich ne Gehirnwindung verrutscht". One of my favs is "Sag mal hast du Blödheit gefrühstückt?" (Vegeta) And though I love the fighting scenes in DBZ (I mean, come on! Who didn't enjoy it when gohan destroyed the cell juniors and kicked cells ass or when Future Trunks turns Freeza into dust?) I loved the series most because of it's creative humor that never got boring! But I'm babbling XD U did a great job with this! | Title: It's freaking AU.
Reviewed By: VSP On: March 27, 2011 09:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know everything you said is entirely true, especially the B/V bits. I keep reading the same thing again...and again...and again... While you have good pointers, I have to disagree with you on the AU part. Hell, it's AU. Anything can happen. Why should anyone restrict to canon knowledge when it's a freaking AU? This is what I dislike the most - if you have to STICK to canon, like having Trunks older than Pan or something like that, or that Vegeta was downright evil when he's evil... what's the point of making an AU ou fic? Get my drift? That's what AU is SUPPOSED to be - you DO NOT tie yourself down with canon, because AU is a gateway to imagine ALL. IMHO, AU is like creating your own story, only using other people's characters - and THAT is the beauty of it. Put canon into it and it just doesn't work. I do agree about the Mary Sue bit though. | Reviewed By: Cherryveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 17:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whahahaha you're so right! I also dislike the way bulma's lips always taste like strawberry etc. xD it's absurd, my lips never taste like strawberry, nobody's lips I've ever tasted anyway xD I'm getting tired of all the same fanfics :'(
| Reviewed By: Ananda On: June 17, 2002 22:35 EDT
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I laughed so hard when I read this. Found it quite funny. Mostly cuz It's true... ^_^
If you write more,I would read it. Just for laughs. And cuz It's good. | Reviewed By: see jane conform On: April 13, 2002 20:12 EDT
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ha... this was sad but oh so true...
yeah, i was laughing while i read the first part and then i got to the goku scratching the head thing and i was like... 'oh, damn'... because i am oh-so-guilty of that.... sigh, but he looks so darn cute when he does it! course... in all fairness it wasn't even in a g/cc fic... it was an odd couple so i should make up *some* points for originality there... | Reviewed By: majin sue On: April 04, 2002 06:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this while under pain medication after my sugery. Boy you hit the nail on the head, or is it head on the nail?. Anyway great stuff. Good work. Am I making any sense?. | Reviewed By: Jess On: February 18, 2002 11:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'twas very funny,and very true!I really like! | Reviewed By: Cyndi On: February 17, 2002 20:35 EST
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*Sweatdrop* I'm guilty of a few of those self-insertion things in my fic Believe/Reality (*cough*MadelovetoPiccolo*cough*). If I can admit it, then so can everyone else.
I also found the V/B things to be hilarious...you're bang on about that.
Perhaps you should do the no-no's of YAOI fics next *evil grin* | Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2002 23:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! Very funny! I really love number 4. I mean I love Vegeta and Trunks, I really do, but I just couldn't write about us having sex (little too close to my actual fantasies, *wiggles eyebows suggestively*). J/K. Anyway good chapter.
-JB
PS. Did I win?! Did I win?! Oh God, please tell me I won! | Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2002 03:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good once again. I guess the erotic tail thing goes in the basic lemon. I however, feel that my B/V fic, which will be out tommorrow, will be different. No baka, no erotic tail scene, no cry over Yamcha run to Vegeta, no bickering (not much). I mean, really, she hardly does that. I did see the Trunks Saga. She didn't fight with him, he didn't fight with her. She'd just catch him off guard and he'd listen. I didn't agree with the cussing or lemon parts, but none of stories have cussing or lemons. Suggestiveness, yes. I find it amusing. But why should I write about what I don't know. Besides, I'm hardly going to write about a lemon when it will be from my own experiences...too personal. I think a good author can write a story with a minimum of cuss words and suggestiveness and still have a good story. Heck, I skip most lemons anyways. If the stories are nothing without them, then all you have is a lemon anyways.
Getting off my soapbox now...hopefully my A/U B/V will be--different (sadistic grin) My muses name is--too long to put in this already too long review. Leaving now, promise! | Reviewed By: jessbear [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 04:52 EST
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LOL that was sooo true ! lol (again)...anyhoo you reviewed my story ~plugs~ i will always love i am a shameless advertizer ~everyone sweatdrops~
anyhoo thanks for the nice reveiw | Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2001 02:47 EST
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I aready left a review but i wanted to ask you to read my FIRST fanfic called Say The Words and tell me what you think because I know you will be honest. It's here on mediaminer. | Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2001 01:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love when you write these things. I can't wait for the next one. | Reviewed By: Jaques Rico On: December 16, 2001 01:12 EST
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Well, dear kitten,
so that was all intended as humor, but you just wasnt able to make that fact clearly understood? What does that say about your magnificient writing abilities, I wonder?!
About Tinni, well FF.net is only a sort of second mirror for her I believe, since her main story "Dragonball SC" has an own site where all her other works are stored as well. Apart from some who are stored at Adimras Forever II, I believe.
Still one good A/U of of many thousand DB-stories on FF.net doesnt strike me as very impressive. And while Tinnis "Vejitasei" is good, it is still far from outstanding.
I dont think you have read "Vejitasei Ascendant" in the meantime, right? Maybe that would have upped your standards a little bit. If you cant obtain an Aestethicism ID tell me so and I might send you a Zip-Archive of that story so that you can judge for yourselve.
Hm, if you are so a big fan of V/B that you cant endure the knowledge about the existence of thousands of bad V/B-Stories on the net, you might want to produce some good ones to even the ratio a bit, or perhaps read some of the better ones. Go to Adimras Forever II and try "Chains and Chackles" for example.
I usually simply decide to ignore the bad stories.
Oh and the fact remains that most of your comments are neither very original nor very funny. If you find someone who can earnestly laugh about that stuff, I believe you have found another mental case. Kind of an achievement, huh?
Greetings
JR | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
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