Meeting in the Library

So i am writing my own fanfic where 8 American wizard students are sent to Hogwarts, there they meet the whole crew and all this crazy stuff is gonna happen. I say ‘gonna’ cause it is not all that crazy yet but i am getting there. This is a scene i decided to illustrate in my fic where Colin, one of the students, meets Hermione. It is really horribly cliche scene but it’s fun! You can read the fic at http://fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1113997 .
Please review the pic and the fic!