Fan Fiction ❯ A Collection of Poems ❯ Poetry I ( Chapter 1 )

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Hello…I need some help. I am currently working on poetry in school and I need constructive criticism. Please read my poems and review telling me if they are good, bad and why so.

Thank you! (Most of these don't rhyme, they don't have to)

These are three separate poems!

The cold seeps in

Almost hauntingly white

Surrounds the room

Settling in for a long winters sleep

For it is here to stay.

Looking out the window

To a world on the outside

Watching as people walk by

Not noticing the silent observer

Who remains trapped on the other side.

Sunlight filters in

From outside the glass

Golden hues fill the room

And bath it in cheerful colors

But only for a few hours

For when the sun descends

The room will again be dark and cold.