InuYasha Fan Fiction ❯ everything back but you ❯ CHAPTER 4 ( Chapter 4 )

[ P - Pre-Teen ]

Warning: Sesshomaru may be a little ooc in the story along with Ren just in this chapter I think

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Kag/ren:4

Kag/fluffy(a.k.a seshomaru:2

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Ages

Kagome:19

Ren:21

Usui:19

Karin:17

Iniuyasha:250

Sesshomaru:500

Sango:19

Miroku:20

Shippo:7

Rin:6

As every one got in to the well, kagome had them hold onto her shoulder. Every one was filled with curiosity as they were surrounded by the heavenly blue lights (even ren but he didn’t show it)

Right when every one finally touched the ground a clawed hand reached in and snatched kagome out of the well. As Karin, Kenta (I finally found out his name yay me) and Ren quickly climbed out of the well to find out what happened to her. But, when the got out of the well everyone minus kagome anime sweat-dropped and fell. Fore what they say was not a damsel in distress but a very mad 19 year old and a guy on red and w/ silver hair falling face first in the dirt

‘what have I gotten myself into?’ Karin, Kenta, and Ren thought at the same time

Now:

As of now everyone in the inu group and some wandering village people and even the walking clay pot came to see what the commotion was about.

“I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU NOT TO COME BACK! We have Kikyo now.”

“WELL I DON’T GIVE A DAMN WHAT YOU SAY AS LONG AS I CAN GET THROUGH THE WELL! You aren’t my dad you can’t tell me what to do!”

After Kagome said that she started to walk toward Karin and Sango who were engaged in conversation. Along with Miroku, Kenta, And Ren were most likely talking about guy stuff according to how flushed Kenta was it was probably perverted. (If you read the chibi vampire series you will find out just what Ren is up 2 XP) Then Inuyasha decided to open his big mouth again. (doesn’t he always)

“Well at Kikyo isn’t a cheep copy of the original.” inuyasha ( after that crack I’m not going to capitalize his name) smirked when seeing Kagome stop walking. As several gasps were heard among the slightly larger inu group. And what made this even worse inuyasha’s smirk grew when everyone including himself saw the lone tear that spilled down her face.

“ I suggest you don’t call my sister a cheep copy. For she is worth more than that corps you call a lover.” (and you can guess who said that XP)

“Brother Sesshomaru.” Kagome said while the tear from her face.

“Sesshomaru! What’s scum like you doing here.” inuyasha said while pulling out his big sword. “Here to pick a fight?”

“Why would he fight if he brought Rin?” asked Sango not to happy with what inubaka said to her sister like figure.

“Lord Sesshomaru! Lady Kagome!” said a little girl who ran up to the group. “Kagome did the bad man make you sad again?”

Ren’s p.o.v.

“Well at Kikyo isn’t a cheep copy of the original.” after hearing that for some reason wanted to break his neck and when I saw that tear my mind went to kill mode. Gods what Is she doing to me? I’ve been getting this weird feeling for the past 3 years since I met her. And hey what’s that silver haired guy talking to my girl! Wait where’d that come from? Uhg! After this trip I’m gon’na need counseling. Wait did that little girl say he hurt her more than once!? This guy is unbelievable!

End p.o.v.

“Kagome show my worthless half-brother what your really capable of.”

Kagome looked at her brother as if he were crazy

“Sesshomaru are you sure? You told me not to show anyone.”

“I am your sensei am I not?”

“Yes bu..”

“Then I give you permit ion to show them.” Sesshomaru said as he tossed her a blue kimono.

Kagome smiled she hated keeping secrets from her friends well some of them the only one who knew was Sango, Sesshomaru, Miroku, Shippo, and Karin. Kagome chanted a few words under her breath and was then surrounded by a blue lightand when it faded everything about her had changed. she had a slender body, a fuller chest, grew a couple of inches, her hair was like a foot longer and ended in long waves of black and blue above her bum. The kimono she now had on fit her perfectly and on her right hip was the western lands crest and some stars(the crest is the cresent moon that’s on sesshomaru’s forhead) she also had dog ears on the top of het head and her eyes had turned from chocolate brown to ocean blue and she had blue claws that could cut through anything. All in all she was breathtaking. All the men were like O.O and inutrasha was studdering. After he got over it he said

“Feh she’s still a cheep coppy

(that’s it!!! (I open a portal and try to slug inuyasha) you good for nothing piece of s#@! she’s been nothing but nice to you and you call her that!? Why I ought’a (punches inu a while longer) ok on with the story (jumps through portal and portal closes ))

After that little scene inuyasha is on the ground twitching

“wow she’s scary” Rin says

“No she’s crazy.”shippo says

Everyone:yeah she is

End chapter

So how was it? Sorry its short but to satisfy you this story will probily be between 30-50 chapters long considering on how short the chappies have been lately Kfm did it have enough fluff in it? Anyway R&R