SD Gundam Fan Fiction ❯ I Hate My Name! ❯ Love Hurts ( Chapter 11 )

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Woo doggy am I on a roll! Really I am! I've been writing out a new chapter for `Unable To Love', typing out this chapter, and revising past chapters of `A.N.A.O.F.V'. It's tiring, but it's truly a labor of love, well actually writing is a passion for me. In fact I got a bronze medal for a short story that I did about the `Titanic' a couple weeks ago for a contest at school. It felt really good because I don't win much. ^^;
 
Chaos: *puts hands on her hips* Alright enough with the boasting and get to the chapter! T..T+
 
Me: Am I boasting? 9_9
 
Grappler: Of course not! You're being soooo modest that it seems like your boasting! >:(
 
Me: Oh, so I'm not boasting. ^_^
 
Grappler and Chaos: Idiot. T____T0
 
DISCLAIMER: I only own Chaos and Zeth. Also, the idea for this chapter was brought to y'all by Sayla_Gathermoon! Thanx for the creative juice boost girl! :D
 
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I Hate My Name!
Chp.11: Love Hurts
 
In Shute's Backyard…
 
Shute: *pumps his arms in the air* Yesss, I've been waiting for this day for a very long time! :D
 
Zeth: What have you been waiting for? 6_6
 
Zero: My beloved princess is stopping by for a visit today. v_v
 
Zeth: Really? I thought she was dead. >:l
 
Zero: *face faults* No ZETH, she didn't die! She just turned to stone for a while when the Dark Axis took over Lacroa. T_T+
 
Zeth: When did that happen? 9_9?
 
Zero: *trying to keep a level head* A very, very, long time ago. T__T++
 
Zeth: So Lacroa must be free from the Dark Axis if the princess is back to normal right?
 
Zero: NO!! NOW STO- ><+++
 
Captain: *slaps his hand over Zero's mouthpiece* Not necessarily Zeth. Lacroa is still under the Dark Axis's control, but not as badly as before. Understand? 6_6
 
Zeth: Yeah, whatever. :l
 
Keiko: Shute!
 
Shute: Yeah mom?!
 
Keiko: *walks into the yard with Princess Rele* Someone's here to see you. ^-^
 
Zero: Princess! *floats over to Rele, bends on one knee, and pops up a rose* It's been far too long milady.
 
Rele: *accepts the rose* Thank you Zero. *looks to everyone else* Good morning gentlemen. v_v
 
Chaos: *crosses her arms* Excuse me, but do I look like a `gentle men' to you? T_T?
 
Rele: Oh my, you're a girl?! I would've never guessed considering the kind of armor you're wearing. >:)
 
Chaos: And what does that supposed to mean?! >:O
 
Rele: All I'm suggesting is that you change the color of your armor and make it look more `feminine'. I'd say make it a nice lilac or even pink color because the black and dark purple really takes away from your figure.
 
Baku: *leans over and whispers to Captain* I take it that she's a fashion expert. <_<
 
Chaos: I'd rather eat a whale carcass than repaint my armor! I hate pink and other happy colors like that. Besides, I wasn't made to be the `happy-pretty-princess' of the Dark Axis! I was made to be the ruthless dimension conqueror and I don't think that it would make sense to look like a stupid gundam version of a Barbie doll! >__<+
 
Rele: *coughs* Tomboy. >:)
 
Chaos: I'm gonna kill you! *lunges for Rele*
 
Captain and Baku: *grabs Chaos's arms to hold her back* Chaos, don't! O_O0
 
*There is a very awkward silence in the area*
 
Keiko: Um, I'm going to get back to checking my papers now. -.-0 *walks away*
 
Zeth: *eyes get all big and glittery* I have never been able to consciously insult Chaos without fear…This girl is amazing. O.O
 
Rele: I'm sorry to be so blunt about your fashion problem, um, your name?
 
Chaos: Chaos Cammerce. T_T
 
Rele: Chaos, but I'm a girl of honesty- *Zeth puts his face right up to hers* Can I help you? 6__60
 
Zeth: You insulted Chaos right in her face… O_O
 
Rele: So? T.T?
 
Zeth: …You're amazing. O__O
 
Rele: *tries to slip away* Um- yeah. Stay away from me. o___o0
 
Zeth: *follows her with his hands poetically cupped* But I cannot resist you my love! >_<
 
Rele: Wh-what did you just call me? o_____o0
 
Zero: *gets between them* Um-master Zeth, I think you're making the princess feel uncomfortable. 6_6
 
Chaos: He makes everyone feel uncomfortable Zero. T_T0
 
Baku: You really shouldn't get attached to her anyways Zeth because you can't marry her because she's a princess.
 
Zeth: So…
 
Captain: …And she needs to marry a prince…
 
Zeth: …So…
 
Chaos: …Which you are not…
 
Zeth: …So…
 
Shute: How dense are you? -.-0
 
Zeth: But I can be a prince right?
 
Zero: Wrong, you have to be born into princehood. -___-0
 
Zeth: Noooooooo! ;______;
 
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Oh poor Zeth, will he ever woo his princess? Y'all find out later! Please leave your reviews, comments, complaints, and ideas because they are always very helpful!
 
P.S.- My brother (the inspiration for Zeth) wants to know how all of you think of his character. Yeah, he's hanging over my shoulder right now! XD
 
T, T, F, N, ta, ta, for now! ^_~