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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2010 19:48 EST
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i really like your OC tamotsu, he's quite the comic relief. one wonders if they aren't all drawn to kagome in some way. inuyasha is trying to get to edo, but keeps getting waylayed by needy people dragging him grudgingly in hopefully kagome's direction. kagura and shippou are seeking sesshoumaru out. the only ones who are having difficulties are miroku and sango. --i love the humor you pepper such a serious story with. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 20:24 EST
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so sorry this is so late... wow, kagome's now awake and we sort of have an inkling of what's going on. great stuff! ♥
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2010 00:17 EST
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Great job on book I, nice to see you jumping head first into Book II. I love the length of your chapters and the quality of the work. Its hard to come by stories that are long, written well, and have a plot the grabs you.. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 17:48 EST
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When I came home today, I saw several updates from various authors and decided to save the best for last. =D Just for the record, the entire time I spend reading one of your chapters, my arms are covered in goosebumps. You have this really amazing use of repetition to profound effect. When Chiyoko said "And let's not waste our time thinking how that's not fair", as other characters have been reciting before waking up from their comas, it gave me the shivers. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2010 19:41 EST
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Thank you for the new chapter! I've subscribed to your author alerts so I get to read Book Two. I'm still disturbed by the lack of reviews, since your story isn't boring, or cliche, or tl;dr, or anything except amazing and inventive. Do you post over at ff.net? It can be a little more encouraging over there.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2010 10:32 EST
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This newest chapter ties with 'Kikyou and Kohaku' as my favorite chapter. Thank you for updating!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2010 23:45 EST
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your OC is very interesting --youkai version of miroku *chuckles* i am curious as to the pairings -- you've got lots of women: kikyou, kagome, rin, kagura, and boton =p assuming you've got sango with miroku and they're staying together. (yes, i'm curious because you have listed as one of the categories this falls into is 'romance' and i am a pairing purest, at least for the main two characters). ♣ sesshoumaru's mother, i'm assuming that she's alive and like the typical mother she enjoys annoying and irritating her son (i'm like that, just ask my kids). i figured something about everyone's little portions of prophesy in their dreams has something to do with the prophesy the lady horse youkai's and sesshoumaru's mother had spoken of? --don't mind me, just useless speculation and conjecture to take up space and make it look like a well thought out and pertinent review. succeed or not, i'm out of thoughts so-- adieu, or more appropriately-- jamata. (silly mood, sorry) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1v_nZEljINg --i'm looking forward to more, and when the sun shines the world becomes clearer and clearer. ♥
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Title: Scriptix
Reviewed By: Lalieth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 09:02 EST
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Scriptix : Thank you for the heads up. I have fixed the prologue. And thanks everyone for the reviews so far! I'm very busily writing "Sesshoumaru, Jaken, and Rin" as we speak. I hope to get it up next week.
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 08:04 EST
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Okay, and now I'm done with what you have so far. And all I can say is - stunning. Your first set of chapters was written in an amazing storytelling voice, and the second half hasn't disappointed at all. The visions everyone is having are downright creepy, and I can't wait to read more about what happens!
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Reviewed By: Scriptix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 04:45 EST
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I've just started to read this fic, so I thought I'd let you know that your prologue is glitching: "how odd: blank named file in directory how odd: blank named file in directory" At first I thought this was some future AU despite the summary, rofl.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2010 22:47 EST
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there are just too few reviews! ♣ so now kikyou is flesh and bone instead of a reanimated porcelain shell-- searching for answers. i guess the big question is 'what happened to kagome?' whatever had she done with naraku and the jewel seems to be what caused the horrible weather, like a pyroclastic explosion followed by heavy rains-- a cleansing? i'm looking forward to finding out how each party will fare, if they will come together, and what you will reveal. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 15:22 EDT
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"His Imperial Indifference is waiting for us.†~LOL~ the best description i've ever read! ♣ this just keeps one at the edge desperate to know about everyone's fate and of what will happen next. one hopes for kagome's safety but fears the worst. --emotionally riveting. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2009 02:05 EDT
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wow! that was some read. one is in awe at the depth you delved into their own personal... hells? you are an amazing artist-- painting color with black on white words. ♥ thank you, ginny --in eager anticipation for more.
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Reviewed By: JaneyJane [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 21:23 EST
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You write very well...your grammar is perfect, and your characters very well described. I'm surprised to have to click a button instead of turning a page. The only thing I wonder about is whether or not you've read The Belgariad, by David Eddings. Some of your scenes seem remarkably similar to some passages I've read. It doesn't take away from your story, although it makes me wonder if more similarities will appear. I hope to see a new chapter soon.
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Title: Avid Reader - as always
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2009 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Well, I'm glad you're back and in good health. I haven't read the lastest chapter yet (I've forgotten exactly what happened - outside the time loop concept - in this fic), but I'll be sure to leave you a review when I do. The rating's based on what I DO rememeber. In any case, hope all's well and again - welcome back. ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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