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Reviewed By: inu wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story so far so please please write more!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 11, 2006 22:31 CST
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tHAT'S SO SAD. She did that because she loved her mother. And her becoming a prostitute in her teenage years is sad too. Inuyasha was just in the neighborhood.RIGHT! Thats love when you think somebody is beautiful if they were in Kagome's condition
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Reviewed By: silver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 15:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nicely done cant wait for the next chapter^^
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Title: DAAYYYUUUMMM!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 11, 2006 04:28 CST
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Sexy_C, you are DOING it girl. First off, this chap wasn't long -it was purrfect! You are really taking it there, ne? Poor sango. Everyone has such shitty pasts, but i love it. You gave them depth, not people doing shit for the sake of doing it. But when they all find out the truth about each othe -whoa! I want to be present for that one! And thanks for the shout out girl! Appreciated as always. Now all I need his a hit of He Will Be Loved and my week will be complete! O.~
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 10, 2006 20:40 CST
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I would say Miroku about to get caught but Sango is the one that left him. I et if Sango saw him she say the same thing. Kaggers and Inu are both staying home tonight I wonder why?
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Reviewed By: silver diamond tears [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2006 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woow i luv ur story so much please keep it going
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Title: BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: January 10, 2006 10:30 CST
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This chap was outta hand! So friggin funny! When Inu said "Hot as the dickens" OMG, I almost fell outta my chair. That shit was so hilarious. And look at Miro gettin' all ghettofied! For a minute I felt like i was at a family reunion! This chap was da shit. Oh & no, Inu wasn't a virgin in VOL. I never explained it, but he wasn't born blind. ^-^
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Reviewed By: .k. On: December 24, 2005 11:06 CST
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great story, a few graamer errors tho
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 23, 2005 16:45 CST
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AHHHHHHHH! Inuyasha got a little crush. I know that shows kinda cheesy. Anyway that's so sad how he grew up and lose his virginity. Kagome lose her sadly too. I haven't lose mine but I know I don't want one like that.
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 23, 2005 16:44 CST
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AHHHHHHHH! Inuyasha got a little crush. I know that shows kinda cheesy. Anyway that's so sad how he grew up and lose his virginity. Kagome lose her sadly too. I haven't lose mine but I know I don't want one like that.
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 13:20 CST
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i luv it... thats all i can really say. update soon.
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Title: Talk about wild pasts!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: December 23, 2005 07:02 CST
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Dayum girl! That was deep. I love that you weren't shy with it. Kouga & kikyou are gonna be issues...even though kik hasn't done anything yet. Poor Miro too. I feel sorry for everybody! Oh & that a/n was hilarious! Ain't it a damn shame that men are still saying shit like that?! Great update!!
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 01:19 CST
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good chap!! it was really nice to see their histories and why they are the way they are...lol. damn that was an awkward sentence. :P lmao. but anyway, fantastico. ^_^ more soon i hope!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: December 18, 2005 17:03 CST
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HAHAHAH THE Mirkou flower club. Inuyasha right he going to get caught doing that.Sango talking about Kagome when she probably on the phone with Miroku planning to meet or something.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY!!!! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!! ^_^
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