| "Another Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Inu-Hime-no-Kyuu On: April 10, 2009 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would be better if you actually wrote in either first persone from someone's PoV (like Kagome or Yuki) or third person instead of a combination of third person and play-writing style.Some revisioning would do a whole world of good. It would also help if you would make the characters closer to their personalities in the mangas and animes.Otherwise it would be great!
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Reviewed By: l3abyChick [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg loved it please update!!!!-squeals like a fangirl -others read my review and sweatdrop-
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 09:59 CST
Comment/Review:
i luv this fanfic please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Charlene On: October 24, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so cool...... UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: mishizzletran [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 01:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice
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Reviewed By: gothic fuzzies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this, but the way the dialouge is written is like a play, unless that is how you wanted it to be. Other than that, very nice start.
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Reviewed By: Chezlesea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2005 14:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it, and agree with everything dawn said.
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Reviewed By: kagome15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 13:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
GOOD STORY!! PLEASE UPDATE ^_^
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Reviewed By: dawnstar28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok,um, you do realize that you put your story in the summary of the chapter area right? its seriously messed up...anywayz, the way the story is set up is a little funky, with the dialogue and all. i assume you meant it like a play? ciao for now, dawn
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