| "Yu-gi-oh, Pepperspray" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiten1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! U updated!!!!!!!!! i luv it! can't believe it ended so soooonnnn!!!!!!!!! haha! post a GREAT story like this! later!
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 09:37 CDT
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YAY! Yugi beat Bakura in the Rock-Paper-Scissors game!! Now, about Bakura having red bloodshot eyes, he told Ryou that he cried so much that he missed him so much? I hope Ryou doesn't find out what Bakura was up to while he was gone. I really enjoyed this fic and hope you write another fic compared to this one!!! Ja ne!!!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, I am sorry to see it end. I would love to see Ryou's reaction when he finds out. Loved the story!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 07:46 CDT
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I am glad they figured it out. I hope Yugi can live up to his title. Greatr job. Update soon, please.
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Title: Evil twisted idea!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 19:06 CDT
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Let's see... what evil twisted game that Yugi shall play? Um, like the one that Bakura and Malik dueled each other at battle city on Kaiba's blimp and played a shadow game of when they lose life points, parts of their body starts to vanish. Hope you use this idea because that was all that I can think of. Update!!
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Title: Muhahahaha!!
Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome. update soon please, this is one of my fav. stories :D
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 06:14 CDT
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This si very funny. Poor Yami getting pepper sprayed so much. I hope Seto doesn't kill him or Bakura. Poor Yugi getting dumped by Yami wait until Ryou gets backa nd finds out. I love this it's awesome.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 05:52 CDT
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Very funny so far, I can't wait to see what trouble Yami will cause.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 19:23 CDT
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I have to agree with Bakura of listening to Tea's friendship speeches. THE HORROR, OH, THE HORROR!!!!!!! I wonder what suprise that Yami has for Seto? Maybe he'll disturb him at work until Seto gets the urge of getting pissed off or something. Update ASAP!!!!!
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Title: Great story!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 14:59 CDT
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ROFLMAO I was thinking that Yami promised Seto to stop harassing him even though he had his fingers crossed behind his back. How did Seto have a XXL can of pepperspray? I bet Yami's eyes hurt worse than just spraying his eyes with a small can of pepperspray. Well, update!!
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Title: LMAO
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 17:33 CDT
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Yami is so busted and Bakura is beyond busted!!! Yami got peppersprayed again! That old lady has awesome dueling skills! I wonder where she got them from? Hoping that you will update!!
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Title: LoL
Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! please update again soon!
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Title: Hi!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 18:53 CDT
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Oh, I was hoping for that Tea would die, but since you said you don't support character deaths, I can't think of anything else to hurt Tea. I just can't stand Tea! I just can't! Well, it's a awsome chapter and hope you continue!
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Title: Please...
Reviewed By: BlOoD bAtH On: August 23, 2005 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon....if you have any intention of the sort!! :P I love this story! it's hilarious! I like the "plot"!!!! :P please update soon!!!! *glomps "Yami Bakura"* I LOVE YOU!!
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Title: Tea being invited for dinner means that... *evil smile*
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2005 19:39 CDT
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Uh-oh!!! I wonder what 'Bakura' plans to do to Tea at dinner? Maybe have one of the chefs cook her alive and serve her for dinner or have the chefs poison her food and she dies!!! Yeah! Put that in your next chapter, I beg of you!!! And also, update right away!
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Title: Too hilarious!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 14:35 CDT
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Poor Yami!! He got peppersprayed by Seto. Wow, I have to agree with Malik. He was prepared. Now, what other evil schemes will Yami (who is taken over by Bakura) will do next? UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hiten1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, u update! now, update sum more.
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Reviewed By: Gangsta Helen On: August 19, 2005 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have 2 update plz update
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Reviewed By: Hiten1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 20:36 CDT
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totally kewl!!! u HAVE TO update TODAY! AGAIN! MWAHAAAAAAHAHAHAHA..ahem...yes.
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 20:29 CDT
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OMFG!!!! HAVING BAKURA TAKING OVER YAMI'S BODY IS WAY BETTER THAN SENDING PEOPLE TO THE SHADOW REALM!!!!! *laughing while having tears in her eyes* Poor Yugi. Hope Yami is telling the truth because it didn't sound like it at all. So, now Tea got crushed, huh? Good! Maybe her bones are already broken and she can't move anymore!! *evil laugh* PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: ShIeTz_4_U [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Classic!!!!!!! this is humorish! me like it!!!!!!!! update tomorrow!
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Reviewed By: KIMMI2 On: August 18, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Classic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LUUUVVVVVVV ITTTT!!!!!!! hope ya update SOOONNNN!..wait.,no...NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! UPDATE NOW! ^^
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Reviewed By: Hiten1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story u got there! keep the gewd work up! and one more thing...UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Javoc On: August 17, 2005 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE THE BEST!!!! THIS IS THE BEST!!!!!!!! AND SO FREAKING FUNNY! U HAVE TO BE THE TOPEST!!!!!! (Believe me, I'm a critic. THIS IS THE BEST) upddatiee!!!
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Title: YAY!! Another great fic!!
Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2005 21:04 CDT
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I know that evil grin on Bakura's face. I know he's gonna cause lots of havoc while Ryou is away. My idea is that when the repairmen come to his house, make Bakura send their minds to the shadow or something insane like that. Then, he decides to throw a house party and ivites everyone. Also, have Bakura serve Sake to the yamis and they get all drunk. Hope you use this idea. Please continue!!
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Reviewed By: KIMMI On: August 14, 2005 10:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U SOOOOOOO HAVE TO UPDATE!!!!
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