| "Take good care of my baby..." Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 15:09 CDT
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So glad you updated, chibi! I love watching Yohji's trtansformation! Looking forward to more!
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Title: Yay!!!!!!
Reviewed By: KD nsi On: June 06, 2006 12:07 CDT
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yay, you updated! And such a fun chapter. I don't find yohji boring at all, can't believe you do... ;) this was fun. More, please!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 01:29 CDT
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Great to see this fic getting some attention! poor Yohji! Can't wait to see if Aya will help him through everything and give him what he REALLY needs! Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 22:17 CDT
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Yup. That'd be cigarette withdrawl according to my brother. Heehee. Fun. Love you lots, chibi.
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Reviewed By: KD nsi On: February 16, 2006 21:59 CST
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not boring! love him thinking of the strong points of his teammates, and how he wants to give those things to his son...
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: February 16, 2006 20:53 CST
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Awww. That's so sweet.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 20:51 CST
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Not boring! Sweet! I'm glad that you updated. And don't worry about categorizing your story! Who cares? It's a good story and I'm looking forward to more! I'm always happy to *remind* you! (spam code is LVYU, awww! it knows I love you!)
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Title: keeping my promise
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 21:01 CST
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I'm keeping my promise. You're writing, I'm reading and therefore reviewing! This chapter is short, sweet, and to the point. It's a good look inside Yohji's head. It's always nice to know what he's thinking! Your style really is enjoyable to read. It's uncomplicated without being 'simple,' if that makes any sense at all. If it doesn't, suffice it to say that I love reading your stuff. I'm holding out for an update on "Appeal" though! (eek! CAT was in my spam filter, like kitten, like koneko! it's a sign, it means write more WK! yea!)(OMG, I got another one and it's PYRE, i hope that's not a sign, 'cause if it is, it might not bode well for me. i'm too young to die)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 20:14 CST
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Yay! I'm first. I think. Love it. Write faster. The evil field of study is criminal psychology with an emphasis on profiling. Yeesh! What a mouthful.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 11:09 CDT
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Yeah, yeah. I know. However, I stand by my original thought. Sorry about the handcuffs and whip cream thing. Too much forensic psych and profiling homework makes phoenix go goofy. And the next chapter of this is where? (Other than rolling around in your brain)
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 12:04 CDT
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Uh oh, gotcha, Yotan! I love how he and Ken argue. Nice dialogue! As to being stuck on the others ::SHOVE:: now you're not stuck. BTW, about Ran being a virgin? ::big evil grin:: not telling.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 20:54 CDT
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Well, we knew this had to happen eventually with as much as Yohji gets around.
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Reviewed By: Andartha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 09:14 CDT
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Intriguing start. I like family-related stories : )
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 21:51 CDT
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What the...? Didn't I review this? Maybe under another name, but I don't see the other one? Anyway, very interesting, what Yohji obsession, you seem normal to me, keep writing, blah, blah, blah.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 20:48 CDT
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ooh, interesting. I hope you're up to maintaining three works-in-progress... What Yohji obsession? You mean it isn't normal to write and talk about him constantly? ;)
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