| "By the Hand of Destiny: Book One; The Journey to Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blade Razer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 22:26 CDT
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I'm glad that someone was able to pick back up the story with Artemis. You did a really good job. I can't wait to see what happenes next!!!
Ever watching
~Blade |
Reviewed By: Ambient Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2002 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very good, I'd like to know why it's not on the featured list! It should have more reviews, too. |
Reviewed By: PhoenixG [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See updating isn't so hard to do!!! ^^ Great chapter!!! Cant wait to see the next!!!!
Phoenix |
Reviewed By: Phnx On: April 27, 2002 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Ahem* ... I've been waiting... and waiting... and waiting... for you to post the next chapter!!! *Grrrr* Peas! Post! Soon! *Deep Breath* Thats all for now! I'm not reviewing again untill the next chapter is posted! ^^
Phnx |
Reviewed By: hiddencharm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2002 00:32 CST
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WOW! This is... amazing... totally different from what I was expecting and it drew me in... so much that, after discovering that there were no more chapters, I think I will go insane; like dilandau! I neeeeed more.. *drool* pleeze fulful my sickly needs and finish the story as soon as humanly possible *chuckle* In other words, i love it! Unique fun, definitely different. |
Reviewed By: PhoenixG [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2002 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your fic, very interesting! Luvin every word! Theres a strange twist of something in your fic... It's Great!!! Post the next chapter soon!!!
Phoenix |
Reviewed By: PhoenixG [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2002 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, very interesting! Update soon! I cant wait to see what happens next!!!! and may I say this fic may just be the best I've ever read... ^^
Phnx |
Reviewed By: Setsuna'sSara On: February 08, 2002 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fantastic!! Besides the spelling and grammer errors, this was a great read! Very original, too!!! |
Reviewed By: mara- On: February 02, 2002 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another chapter here please! I like allen/ art. or whatever the best! get more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! up soon please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar On: January 30, 2002 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original story. I like it. Write the next chapter Please! |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 13:34 CST
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Yet another rather *cough* Interesting chapter *sdrop* In any case I found a few errors (one sentence someone ends on one paragraph and starts on another. I think it was the part where Destiny was noting how Dilly noticed her fighting skills and her exotic coloring.)
And in the fifth paragraph u have. "This man confuses and scares me." twice. But otherwise it was very good...^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 13:17 CST
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I give you a perfect ten for everything! The style of writing was very enjoyable and once again no s/g errors. Enjoyment factor is also a ten. It was kind of romantic if u ask me ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
IMHO You have a very good style of writing and again I didn't see any s/g mistakes. There's enough detail but not too much to making the story boring. The plot also seems very original and creative. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 12:54 CST
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The story has an interesting beginning and I couldn't find any grammar/spelling errors. Good job so far ^.^...
Dilly's girl didn't u write that one story about three kingdoms,Hitomi,Van and some other guy? *Sdrop* I mite just be mistaking u for someone...gomen |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2002 16:41 CST
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I have to admit to not being overly knowledgable about escaflowne, but it didn't seem to matter when reading this. I was hooked on every word, and the descriptions were well placed, but not overly dwelt on. Good work, and yay can't wait for the lemon! |
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