| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Rainchild On: December 20, 2002 07:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic. It's very entertaining. Please continue the fic. Thanks. |
Reviewed By: Onna On: December 08, 2002 07:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Don't you say that! It's great to be able to read this once agan after the $%&@# jerks at Ff.net removed it! I love this story! We all do! So update soon 'kay? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 18, 2002 18:30 EST
Comment/Review:
You can't be serious. MMO was the birthplace of DITH and I think it's a great idea that you're posting it here again. You yourself said that you lost alot of addys from your readers. I think the vast mayority aren't even aware that that you're at MMO. At least here you have creative freedom and you don't have to worry a "ratings" problem. I think that given a little time former readers will start to trickle back to this site. So cheer up, it's not like you've lost them permanently. As for JB, she keeps forgetting to review the last chap, but then again she's been so busy lately that she has to make an appointment to talk to herself. Anyway, I think things will get better so hang in there ^_^. Hugs-Sue |
Reviewed By: Chiku On: November 17, 2002 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic a long time ago on ff.net. But suddenly it disappeared. Glad to see it back online here again and with some new chappies. Please continue writing, it's really good. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course posting here was a great idea! While FFN has a big sick up their ass, MMO doesn't and there's a good place for it here! OK, sorry, got a little upset you were EVEN THINKING of taking it off. So please don't, you know people probably just don't review because either they're COMPLETELY IDIOTIC, or they're just too damn lazy.... |
Reviewed By: angelscaramel On: November 16, 2002 10:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading your summary, I think you should continue to post your writing. It's a great story and very original. You should be very proud of your work. Don't let a thing like low reviews keep you from posting your story.
Just some advice from one writer to another.
Ashanti |
Reviewed By: Meow On: November 15, 2002 23:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this story for awhile. I really REALLY like it. I think it is great. I was reading it at FF.net, but I guess it was took off b/c of the rating. I'm happy you post it here too. Please don't get frustrated, and continue to update. |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: November 04, 2002 16:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH........ I loved this chapter!!!!! So emotional!!!!!!
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great idea!!!!
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: November 04, 2002 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thus mine eyes decive me? The prodical child has been found! That dam fan.ficnet., do they have any idea how long I searched for your story. Luckily I took a stroll down MM's lovely list of fan fics and low and behold look who I found.
Glad your back alive and kicking! And pleased to say that your writing and creativity has only improved!!! keep it up!!!!! Glad to have you back!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 04, 2002 04:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHITONASTICK!!! WHAT AN UPDATE!!! OMGOMGOMG!! Yamcha an android? Bardock is Freeza's seer? Damn, I didn't see any of that coming. I feel like I got hit by a truck!! I wonder how everyone will take the news about what Yamcha really was. And I can't wait to find out what Bardock has to tell that slithering asshole. To really complicate things Victor now has Amanda. That bastard is delusional and there's no telling what he'll do to her. I think I'm gonna be sick! I hope, no I pray, that Radditz can hear her please for help because I'd love to see that cutie rip Victor apart limb from limb. Yes, it would most definitely make my year ^_^. Thanks so much for the update notice. I always love the hell out of your chapters and this one left me speechless. Bravo on a job extremely well done and screw MMO-I give this chap a 100 for everything :D. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Trunks102 On: October 09, 2002 19:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
i'm so glad i finally found your updated fic here - i've been having some problems reaching this site. nonetheless, i really enjoyed this chapter, and i think it served well as a transition period between the fight with Zarbon and Frieza's impending arrival. great chapter - i especially enjoy chichi's persona as the troubled housewife, and i also liked the particular twist with yamcha's letter. please update soon! |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 01:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
I can't believe it took me SOOO long to finish this but I'm finally caught up! This story is absolutely amazing. I love how you've woven the plot and the way you've developed each of the characters as well as giving Bulma some useful powers. The whole thing with Zarbon really added some depth. That and the asteroid were great storylines to effectively underline the arrival of Frieza. I love the relationship you've built between Vegeta & Bulma, so protective and caring yet still outwardly emotionless. Although I loved it when he let it all go when he thought he was going to lose her... that was sweet. And now I'm very intrigued as to what poor Yamcha left for Bulma. Can't wait to keep reading. :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest On: October 03, 2002 02:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What didn't she want to know?!?!?!?! Great! Now I'm going to be up all night worrying about this. *Sighs* Oh well. Great Chappie! I'm glad Susan told me about it or I probably would have never seen it. Anyway, Great, Wonderful, Terrific!!-JB |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 01, 2002 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I loved your story so far and have rated it highly, your style of writing has depth and captures emotions and feeling. For a R rated story I'm extremely impressed with the way you avoided a crude outlook and also swearing which has often been the case with many other such writers to my disgust. Your spelling and grammar is done well, a few rare exceptions where on several occasions you've missed letters and accidentally pressed a wrong button eg. oz king instead of ox king, but hey easy mistakes hardly noticable. Originality and Creativity very good, the bonding idea has been discussed in stories often but the way you put forward your ideas for the process and the closeness in it is terrific. Overall I totally enjoyed it, expecially the way you kept the arrogance and hardness in Vegeta while showing a softer side in him. Oh and loved the involvement of Zarbon an inducement not used often. All in all an 10 out of 10. Good work!!!
Any person reading this who haven't read the story yet get your but in gear and read. Enjoyment is a promise.
Will review again at the finish of story or if in need to say something of importance.
Bye Bye, and once again congratulations on your story. |
Reviewed By: Min On: September 18, 2002 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one hell of a chapter.
I loved it!
It was so good.
Please update a.s.a.p.
//Min.. |
| Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
