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"Unbridled" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Title: FFRG Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2006 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I think that this was a fantastic short story. Things actually happened. In the grammar and spelling sense "Unbridled" was very well done, and it had a excellent sense for commas, giving the story a good overall flow. The beginning was a bit repetitive, though. If I remember, it mentioned something about "chance" twice, in the first line and in the following one, where synonyms or some other phrase could have suited and avoided that repetitiveness. I also complement you on keeping Sesshomaru in character. Great job and thank you very much for submitting to FFRG! --Dee
 Reviewed By: Cyndi [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2006 02:05 CST
Comment/Review:
Yet again you've taken an episode and turned it into a fantastic internal monologue. I love authors who can believably get into Sesshoumaru's head and write him properly! You're a rarity and I commend your talent.

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