| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story. It took me three days to read it all, but it was definitely worth it. Your characterization is wonderful, your plot is well-developed, your action scenes are exciting, and your "intimate" scenes are HOT! Trust me, I am not one to fully read a story that I am 89 chapters behind in unless it's TERRIFIC, LOL. I will definitely be looking for updates for this one from now on and checking out your other stories as well. Excellent job.
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Title: *Smirking A Tenful!*
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only tear that slid down my cheek was the thought that this story only lasted for 11 more chapters... I was going to ask for the time skips but you already answer that question! I love the way everything is going on now... I can't wait for the next update to come face to face with the family of hanyous, youkais, and humans all grown and joined as one unit altogether... it's the most comforting thought for me yet! Your an amazing writer and I'm always in love with the fics you write! The visual aspect that comes with the words used combine with the right mix of humor, drama, and romance!, they definitely rocks my socks and I'm just addicted...! Okay I'm rambling again.. I don't know what I want to see so surprise me! Can't wait for the next update! You did an amazing job- you're soo zealous bout your work so keep up the status!
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Title: *Smirking A Tenful!*
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only tear that slid down my cheek was the thought that this story only lasted for 11 more chapters... I was going to ask for the time skips but you already answer that question! I love the way everything is going on now... I can't wait for the next update to come face to face with the family of hanyous, youkais, and humans all grown and joined as one unit altogether... it's the most comforting thought for me yet! Your an amazing writer and I'm always in love with the fics you write! The visual aspect that comes with the words used combine with the right mix of humor, drama, and romance!, they definitely rocks my socks and I'm just addicted...! Okay I'm rambling again.. I don't know what I want to see so surprise me! Can't wait for the next update! You did an amazing job- you're soo zealous bout your work so keep up the status!
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Reviewed By: I'm Nobody On: June 01, 2007 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
only eleven more chapters... :cries: this was an exellent chapter and I egarly await the next one.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 20:09 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Don't worry, I believe that you know what your doing!! If you didn't, we wouldn't have gotten this far in the story!! (LOL) I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Keep up the terrific work. I hope Kagome and Inuyasha have lots of kids by the time they get to her time. I can't wait for the next chapter. Wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 14:56 PDT
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I like the format of this chapter it was nice to have all the characters being discussed...but please update soon...I love this story so much and i cant wait for when u post again good luck *bows*
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Reviewed By: LittleSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 14:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chap. was soo cute. everyone is either mated or pregnant or married, im surprised im not confused....lol
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 13:34 PDT
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That was a great chappie! I was rereading this too *ahem* and if there is a Japanese translation for 'ly' i would REALLY like to know. my name is Emily, so, yeah, i'd just like to know. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 12:55 PDT
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Woot! I LOVED that chapter :) I can't wait for another update!!!
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Reviewed By: ran_undine [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 11:48 PDT
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omg so good!! Love the chapter!! i sooooo can't wait for the next one!! :) very good though. your the best!! i always look forward to new chapters from you!! keep writing. Love and Peace to you! :)
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Title: Weeee.... YAHOOOOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 22:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the latest update caused it actually answered everything I wanted to be answered about the story! haha! EEEK! Rin and Shippo finally go all the way- I'm sooooo happy! Now that everyone is paired up all that's left is for some hentai action between Kohaku and his chicky! I want to hear more about these new kids in the story, and apparently the twins or whatever that Kagome is having- OMG, so many kids- these guys are like repopulating the earth... dadadadamn! haha... I wonder what would you name the relationship between Shippo and Rin's kids? Cuz they may not be blood cousins but they're cousins none the less and mates! Lets just make it family, huh? Haha- um... Only thing lacking was the need for the outside characters but then again it's always a back and forth battle between who to focus on- I'm positive we'll see the others again- but yeah let's have some kid focus... Thanks for the major update needed- I'm a little miffed at the long wait but then again I tend to get sidetrack with life as well- haha, And you made it up with like 2 OD long and chalkful of suspense and plot chapters! You're an amazing writer!!!! Love the new update and I think you did a F***KING BANGING JOB (srry for vocab but words can't really describe the excellence of the work done here) I can't wait to see what's up next for this story! Faithful reviewer, Stephanie
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:48 PDT
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I loved the concept of an "Inuyasha moment." The whole chapter was lovely.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 12:04 PDT
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Chpater 87 - the fight. WOW The final attack of SHippou is a humdinger and very well written. A less talented artist wouldn't have been able to write that out well enough to make it believeable. Great Job
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Reviewed By: kittenprophetess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 15:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I were able to give it a 1000 I would. I love it. It is an amazing story. That last chapter with Rin and Shippo was brilliant, steamy and sweet at the same time. Keep up the amazing work.
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