| "The Hits Keep Coming" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:37 CST
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Thank you, darling! Of course, I love it! But, honestly, Aya has got to mellow! I hope Yohji can help him with that and that when he returns, it's not for the other pointy thing in the bed! *grin*
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 27, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh so Yohji is figuring things out... and with a concussion too. I can't wait for the next part, you know with the chance to nag you I think I will join your group... you've convinced me. Well anyway great writing as always and Update Soon!!! (I'll also come nag you at your group... blame yourself you gave me the idea) -soxy
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always wonderful to see Yohji using his detective skills. So delightful in every way -- a perfect mix of warmth and humor, without losing the underlying pain of who they are and from what they do.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 18:42 CST
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A little sad that the only Aya is a sleeping Aya, but I'm sure that'll change soon. I just hope he wakes warm and happy, of course, I won't hold my breath. Anyway, another wonderful chapter. And, while I know you don't want a fic that never ends, I'm really enjoying this and look forward to many more chapters. SOON!
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Reviewed By: the chibi On: November 23, 2005 16:28 CST
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why am i not surprised aya sleeps with his sword? btw i love how aya grumbles in his sleep about yohji waking him up
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 16:18 CST
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Woohoo! Aya sleeping with the sword is incredibly appropriate. Hope you're feeling better. Love it as always.
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww... yotan is SO adorable when he's hurt.. :3 more plz!! ~ycpss~ http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/ycpss/
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 14:36 CST
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It just keeps getting better! It really is nice to see a kinder, gentler side of Aya, but still have it be believable. Lovely chapter. Hope you catch up on your sleep so that you can write more!
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 06, 2005 12:18 CST
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awwwwwwwww!! aya's such a big softie. i love the image of him carrying an invalid yohji to bed. well, i love the image of him carrying a healthy yohji to bed too, but that's neither here nor there. i'm glad you're still updating this story. hmm...i wonder if they have candystripers in japan? probably not, if the family is expected to change linens and so forth. i was just thinking aya would be cute as a candystriper. a surly, grouchy, embarassed-to-be-a-candystriper. maybe, in several years when i'm done with your fanart, i'll draw that. anyway, very sweet chapter. love, redqueen
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 12:12 CST
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I love your sweet, prickly Ran. And Yohji being a whiney baby. And I agree, I think Ran would learn all sorts of nursing skills to help his sister.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 06, 2005 09:35 CST
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aya's so sweet :)
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Title: So sweet
Reviewed By: Jem50 On: November 06, 2005 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last few chapters have been so sweet, but the last one takes the cake. Nurse Aya:)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 23:57 CST
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Wow am I glad I don't live in Japan. Bedside manner is not my strong suit. That is really sweet of Aya though. Does this mean Yohji is a family member?
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Reviewed By: Blythe On: November 02, 2005 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see an AxY that still sounds new & fresh. Love your style, varied vocabulry, excellent grammar. Also love the characterizations, really captured them well. More, please!
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Reviewed By: Sancta On: October 14, 2005 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work!
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