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| "Royal Namekian Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] | Reviewed By: Genome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 00:28 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack, wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love it when things explode into supposedly calm scenes! It's just so unexpected that it pulls you in. Egads. I only have two minor comments. The random lines cutting through scenes really throws me off. I expect to see a new scene or a big time change, but it's a continuation to the last line. xP I'm also a bit lost to when Veggie got his tail back. It seems to pop in out of nowhere, and then disappear again later in the chapter. Maybe it's me and I mised something, but that's buggin' me. Other than those two things, I'm deffinitly loving this new take, but still hating the small amount of reviews you get. Arg. *Bonks Goku* You oaf, stop being so lovably stupid.
| Reviewed By: raccly er 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 14:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off I don't usually review till the last chap on Mm.org, but on this chap, I have. Even if you stopped this fic at this chap, Its more good enough to be called the best pic I've ever read. Its the most well planed out fic I've ever seen! Theres only once in a while that a fic has something I don't expect, or mostly V/B kind of scenes that I like, but un like any other fic I've read, yours has both. You deeply deserve a fanfic award for this! oh, and if ya wanna get your fic even more out there, maybe get even more reviews, try Fanfiction.net, theres alot of people there, and mostly kind ones. Im there too, im 'Raccly e.r 17'. lol, beileve it or not, it is differnt from this account of mm.org. If ya wanna reach me, my e-mail is: raccly_er@yahoo.com, and you can find my aim and yahoo sceen names in my info.
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 02:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veggie transformation bastard to gentleman in .5 just cause his son kicked his ass! I love it! It's so totally adorable and I love the integration of Royal Request.
| Reviewed By: Cherry Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 02:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow I loved your story you have not reveiwed in a long time I was pleased when you did please keep continue your story ^_^
| Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2005 23:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I always thought that they would get together on Namek.
| Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really like your story! it was very different, and very nice. :) the whole idea of them getting together on namek was so intriguing. and you did such a wonderful job with the lemon. ~_^ that was the most romantic piece i have read in a long time, if ever.
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