| "Naruto meets Yugi- Duelist & Ninja Chaos" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Title: Been Awhile
Reviewed By: RAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2008 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story off and on for awhile. The way everything is scrunched together on the page often hurts my eyes. >.< But, the story itself is kick-ass as ever! I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah Naruto has his work cut out for him with Odion especially if he brings outs that Apophis duel monster I hope no one tell Naruto who Apophis really is and as for Ino tch she got off lucky if you ask me Exodia has enough power to wipe out the BEWDs there for he of course has more then enough to take her out I wonder what she'll do when she sees him summon Exodia for the first time now thats gonna be interesting oh and one last thing *smack Marik upside the head* will you behave you brat honestly the boy saves ya scrawny hide and sets you free and this is the thanks he gets tch nice well gtg now keep up the great work DJ JA NE
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 12:15 CDT
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SO cute!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 12:00 CDT
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This was totally wickid!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 11:44 CDT
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YAY! Be sure to put in seperate paragraphs!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 12:42 CDT
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SWEET! Again I suggest paragraphing.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 08:19 CDT
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This is awesome! I suggest puting in paragraphs though. It is difficult to read without them.
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Reviewed By: Forse the Deathmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Awsome chapter!!! It must be hard trying to use all of the characters from the two shows but it seems that you are doing great! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Forse the Deathmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trully amazing story! I can't wait untill the next update!
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Reviewed By: SEA RHAPSODY On: October 29, 2006 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! Please! This story is so awsome... so you just have to update! And now that Yami and Anzu are there I have a feeling it will get even more interesting!
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Title: Dragon and Sword Master
Reviewed By: Ryuuken Fighter On: October 25, 2006 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice duel with Shikamaru, and I feel sorry for Naruto becuase of the Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke card now. If I ever got that card, I'd rename it "Ninja Grandmaster Naruto" lol I wish that you wrote out the whole duel, but I like what I saw, so its all good ^_^. I think Shikamaru can learn a lot from the Duel Monsters game. However, if Pegasus and Seto are here, along with all the others, I can only see the problems grow for Yugi. Actually, if you kept Haku alive and made Haku a female, I'd like to see her win Yugi, but since it isn't I'll live with what I got, and vote for Temari all the way! Anyways, as I was saying with Pegasus there, I don't see why he can't create a card with Naruto's name in it LOL that would be a funny duel to see, Ninja Grandmaster Sasuke and whatever the card's name for Naruto would be. Maybe his name would be Great Trickster Kitsune Naruto or something like that, but just a suggestion none the less. Seem's like Tea and Rebecca have even more competion now, but you already know my vote. Anyways, I'll wait patiently for the next chapter, I know what college life is like.
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Reviewed By: Red Dragon Of Egypt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT go Yugi hehe that was the perfect card to play Hinotama with those fire balls shooting from the sky like that anyone within a mile radius would see them hehe just goes to show dont it our Yugi trully is the Mondern King of Games and a man fit to be any king and make any king of old very proud well keep up the great work DJ and update asap gtg now JA NE
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Title: My opinion on this fanfic II
Reviewed By: Yami Goku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:22 CDT
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I think the last time I reviewed was shortly after that Ninja battle... Okay, I'll start off with some stuff I forgot to tell you in my last review. First off, I was a little surprised by the fact that Sasuke becomes a villain later on in the series. I mean, I always knew that Sasuke was an a-hole, but damn! I was sort of hoping that he would be sentenced to death! A little nitpick: Yugi's blood type is AB, not O. The Yugi+Temari pairing...well, Temari isn't really that ugly, it was the artwork style of the Manga that made her not do much for me. I think she looks pretty decent in the Anime. The Naruto+Hinata pairing, I just have one thing to say regarding Hinata: Does she really have big breasts? Do you suppose the reason Naruto fell for her was because of her huge melons? Well, I think that's all I have to say, except for the fact that, somewhat inspired by this fic, I have decided to write a Yu-Gi-Oh!/Naruto lemon series when I'm finished with "Yugi Meets the Saber Dolls: the Lemon"! L8R! (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 19:45 CDT
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I'm so glad that Sasuke got another chance. What really surprised me was that his shinobi status got suspended and cannot learn any ninjutsu and genjutsu at all or he'll pay the consequences. When Kabuto was taking a nap, there were two pairs of crimson glowing eyes and a pair of yellow glowing eyes. I think I know those eyes somewhere. Is it the three Egyptian Gods?! Well, I hope that I am right!! Please continue!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:50 CST
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Wow!!!! I love this story!!!! I'm glad that Sasuke's Heaven Seal is removed and now is in a weaker state. I hope that he doesn't go back to the Sound Village in order to go after Yugi again. I wonder how the trial will go in the next chpater. Update!!!!
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