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Reviewed By: Bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what they be doin'! he he he... that was like soooooo cute! you're like awesome! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Lina Inverse The Dramata [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 01:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, you have me floored. You have their personalities down wonderfully. They aren't giving in easily, yet they aren't being unreasonable. I can't really explain it, but you've managed to capture their personalities, and in Leon's case, his reasons for acting the way he acts and saying what he says. Leon just didn't immediately accept what was presented... But he DID fight his fear. He was confused... but he struggled for reason. D was afraid and you portrayed how he might have reacted, beautifully. And you're right, their a balance and yet so similar. This is just, simply put, an amazing fanfic, and six chapters isn't enough... I'm looking forward to the rest of this story... and to when (Oh so hopefully) when the sexual tension snaps like a thread. *Puts halo on head* Wonderful writing style, and like I said, very in character (even if our darling manga creator wouldn't ever take it to where this is going... but I'm glad it's gone there in this story...) Yeah okay, running out of room for this review. Keep writing. PLEEEAASE.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 20:42 PST
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God i don't even know what to say about this chapter...you covered so much and yet still it was extremely well done
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Reviewed By: aynia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 13:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, these first five chapters are incredible - I especially like the vivid dialogue between D and Leon. ^^ This is definitely one of my favourite PoH fanfics already! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, I\'m so looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 16:44 PST
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i must say the greatest scene in this chapter is the dragon eating Q-chan, completely unexpected, yet sensible and funny. Another lovely chapter keep them coming
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 12:36 PST
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Very sweet. As always extremely well done. I have always enjoyed the dragon. Written perfectly in character.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 21:22 PST
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This is exquisite.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 20:23 PST
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it's so sad the way that Leon is holding on to every shred of hope and D keeps trying to rip it away, i suppose trying to protect himself from later pain and then at the very end there's that little shard of light, with D holding Leon's hand. Great job as usual
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 19:58 PST
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hmmm i never thought that unwilling sleep could have a potential rival in my affections; it's a good thing one is more lighthearted than the other so I will never really have to make a decision as to what is my fave psoh fic
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 14:49 PST
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Curse you D!!! Just say yes!!! Huff! Anyway, please continue, this story is amazing!!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 19:23 PST
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I have to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed this so far. It is well written and the plot is quite interesting. I am looking forward to more chapters in this tale.
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Reviewed By: Nova Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 08:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, I keep checking every day for the next chapter to be up. I really like the plot line that is showing here and I hope you continue this story for a few more chapters at least.
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Reviewed By: sabacat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 04:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOO Happy when I saw a new fic by you! "He shoved it right under Leon's nose so that Leon got a real snootful." ROFLMAO I can so see manga D doing that! I almost spewed my coke all over the screen when I read it! :P So funny! Can't wait to read more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: The Grim Spectre of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 09:37 PDT
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Hello, I just happened to noticed that you posted this after deciding to go back to PSOH fandom on a whim..and I am very glad that I did. Thank you, and I love you more than life itself.
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, I've been reading your fics for a while... well, the ones I've been able to get my hands onto ^_^, and to tell the truth, you're one of the best authors I've run across! Anywho, I just wanted to say that every last one of your fics are wonderful! I loved this one and I hope you'll continue it! I'll be anxiously awaiting an update from you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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