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"Moonlight in Winter" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Title: Moonlight in Winter
Reviewed By: Sapphirefly [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 26, 2005 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was really quite cute - the telling of the legend and the build-up to when Zelgadis makes his entrance. The way you wrote Amelia was very lovely (most people portray Amelia as a whiney brat). Anyway, I quite enjoyed it, and would only say that the 'yellowish-white' and the 'bluish-white' maybe ought not have been placed so close together, but other than that, it was practically perfect. Keep writing.

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