| "Side Effects: heiwa no Jutsu" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Title: Mmija711@wmconnect.com
Reviewed By: Mija711 On: October 07, 2006 05:56 PDT
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omg you have NOOOOOOO idea how long it took me to read this, it took 4DAYS!..not straight but the time I spent on the comp was ALOT, I realized after I raed your colab with JB on The Mirror thingy, that I missed someting, stupid me I thought it was the same SE with Iruka prego, but that didnt make sense with the colab so I got the links and found this and omg you had me busting a gut and hacking out a lung, this was chalk ful of smex and insanity and I soooooooo loved it alot, I almost had a hart attack whenever I couldnt finish it at NIGHT, till tonight, im tired, I started around 6pm at chapter 11 and just finished, its 552am, ok I had to take a break for an hour but you get my point, couldnt stop reading, it was WONDERFUL, I love it and your colabs are truelly hilarious, ty ty ty for the awesome read, totally loved it soo much, cant wait for the sequel and why Iruka adopts skunks lol, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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Reviewed By: strykebak [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 17:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you can't just leave us hanging!!! pleeeeeeease continue! you are such a good writer! it's hard to find humor and talent in the same place. i am guessing nonstop how you're going to end it. though my speculation will undoubtedly fall short of the real thing once it arrives. this isn't a demand, but definitely begging. no, i'm not too proud to beg.
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Title: Good F**king God
Reviewed By: jackyalien On: August 02, 2006 19:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG OMFG OMFG i just spend the last two days reading this all night that i would go to sleep at 7 am..OMFG the damn best piece of writing I've ever read, also the longest one. God it was just chapter 2 and i was already crying I was laughing soo hard. and the sex "talk" with fake Iruka was priceless. god this is the most halarious shit I've ever read. i really hope you didnt forget about this fic. cause im so addicted. man I sped the last two days dreaming either about kakashi and iruka sex or dreaming about how to get sakura to leave naruto and sasuke alone...but a threesum is not as bad as having naruto end up with sakura alone so...yeah.. once again OMFG!
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Reviewed By: Slippery Liz On: April 25, 2006 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha! I've been trying to find this fic ever since ff.net kicked you off. Meanwhile, you've added four chapters of highly excellent porn and hilarity. This right here is good fic.
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 09:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is an amazing story! You should update soonish, I think I am in-love!
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Tress On: March 03, 2006 00:19 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantastic. I was practically rolling on the floor or spitting out my beverages in every chapter. You really do have a way with words and just the characters in general. The only thing I don't really care for is Sakura because she's ANNOYING ! But hey I'll just pretend she died,lol anyways your Ruka and Kakashi are well I'm at a losss for words. Fucking Fantastic comes pretty close though. Well anyways cheers!
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Title: yummy yaoi-ness!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (when logged in) On: December 17, 2005 05:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are no words in the english language to describe how hot that was!!!!!! *gangirl swoon* OMFM it was awesome beyond belief ^_~
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Reviewed By: Goten-Rockz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 04:06 PST
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This is the most KICKASS KakaIru fic I have ever read!...you soooooo have to write more!!! I was in hysterics over the whole 'Iruka' teaching Sasuke and Naruto about sex...I'm not kidding, it was hilarious! You need to get more reviews...I might review each time you write a new chapter so you have loads...:D Keep it going!...and the Hiewa no Jutsu...did u make that up?
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 09:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh WOW. I was just looking for K/I and you gave me a whole new realm. You had me rolling half the time. I love it. More please.
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Title: Side Effects: heiwa no Jutsu
Reviewed By: Charon Umino-Hatake On: November 30, 2005 13:13 PST
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LOVING IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Sekiseishi On: November 14, 2005 09:32 PST
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I love it oh so f***ing much! X3 The first time I read it there were only four chapters. I loved it then, and now I see this and I'm like o.O Moooore! But, yeah. It's great. Hooray for messypeaches!!! *throws candy and diru dolls*
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Reviewed By: smiley5 On: November 04, 2005 06:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i really like your fic... hehe i've read this fic months before and it's only now that i get to read the rest... 21 chapters of nicely written porn is like wow ^_^ haha go write some more! please!
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Reviewed By: Cim26 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 19:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic, I read it when it was only 4 chapters. Then I found out u updated by around 17 chapters and I was about to pass out with joy. That ramen lube idea was fucking FANTASTIC, and oh gawd...Kakashi. I love him more than ever now. You-are-my-hero.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: CatzEyez [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2005 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe you don't have more reviews for this fic! Your story is AMAZING! Normally I would feel slightly perverted for spending so long reading a yaoi story that was supposed to be a one-shot (I actually read the whole thing in one sitting o_O), but this story has so many more elements to it that I don't feel guilty at all. Mostly, it was the humour that I loved--you have the best sense of humour, ya know that? Just the right blend of the sarcastic and the ridiculous ^_^ I really really hope this fic isn't over and done with because I'm so hooked--plus, Kakashi and Iruka still have to admit their love! >_< Anywho, in short: LOVED IT. Please keep writing! CatzEyez~
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Reviewed By: ffpanda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! Holy God Wow! I just spent most of today sitting here reading this fic. It's AMAZING! Utterly amazing! I feel like such a hentai, spending an entire day reading about those 5. Your A/N's are hilarious. Normally I hate them in stories, but your notes didn't detract - they added beautifully and hilariously. I'm assuming this isn't done yet - I hope, I want to hear them say "I love you" XD This story absolutely KICKED ASS!! One of the BEST I have EVER read. God, I'm going to dream of maid costumes and ramen lube tonight. Gah!
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