| "Saiyajin Princess-- Vega's life story" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:46 CST
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Sorry! I meant to say that it took me to the hypermart place, but said that the page I was looking for wasn't there. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:41 CST
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I guess the page http://sarahfanfics.hypermart.net/vstories.html doesn't exist. It took me to some place called hypermart marketplace instead. *sigh* Oh, well. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 03:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. I am going to go to your site and read the other Vega stories. She sounds like a character I'll enjoy. :) |
Reviewed By: DarkMagic On: December 05, 2002 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I enjoyed it. I hope to see the finishing soon. |
Reviewed By: Jess124 On: November 17, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the name you gave to Vegeta's sister! Your story's not perfect, but I gotta hand it to you , good job! I never thought of anyone writing a storyu about Vegeta having a sister. Hurry up with the updates! |
Reviewed By: Teari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 03:01 CDT
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*sigh* What I wanted to say didn't come up right. ^^: What I mean is that there are words in the greater than/less than arrows, and they do not make any sense in the sentances that they are in. |
Reviewed By: Teari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 02:59 CDT
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It's not a bad story; but there are a lot of words in , with the /i after them that make sentences not make any sense. |
Reviewed By: siefire [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2002 11:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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....um.......not bad. But seen this kind of thing before in alot of fanfics.
Your awesome in making fics though! |
Reviewed By: KawaiiMoonAngel On: September 09, 2002 22:39 CDT
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Ok, so i was too lazy to sign in. But n e ways... wut happened to the rest of the story?! i thought there were like... 15 chapters or something! I came back to check if there were updates... and they were gone!!! O.O I think I'm having a heart attack! gehegeuahgeghe. cough cough, alright alright im done. Please bring back those chapters and update new ones! |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 10:41 CDT
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hey! what happened to the stories? I was just reading the big breakup! wwwhhhhaaa! and john and vega were about to get into another fight... oops.. did i give away the story? uh... well u write really good and u need to put the chapters back up!!! |
Reviewed By: Loth Quendi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, despite what some of the others think, I thought this was a very original idea, with likable characters, and I really hope you continue it. Awesome job! |
Reviewed By: Dani/ancients On: July 18, 2002 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have heard better stories from a wall. No affence but I have a better storie to tell. I didn't like it because i didn't understand most of it. Did u mean "KIng Vegeta" Prince Vegeta's father or Prince Vegeta himself? |
Reviewed By: KawaiiMoonAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very good. And yes, same here, don't take the rating too harshly, perfection is still yet to be found. Please keep updating/writing this story, I want to know what happens! If you don't then... um... can you get back to me on that? Anyways. Go Vega! A rather likeable character in my opinion. ^o^v |
Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
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Made a mistake on my last review, I've noticed a fair number of mistakes, spelling errors and inconsistancies. Still, a lot better than most fanfics. |
Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, usually I consider 80% of all author-created-characters a scourge of fanfiction, I find this neat. No actual DBZ characters to interact with/upstage or whatever.
Vega, while 'miss amazing' is actually rather likeable, showing traits that make her very believably directly related to Vegeta.
I rather dislike the choice of the name John, being so...blah-zay, but he's a bit cool in a way too.
Overall very nice work with developing character. The plot...is...hmm, rather unexciting maybe but it seems to fit. Nice job.
Don't take the rating too badly, I personally hate to award 'perfect' scores though it was very tempting here. |
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