| "Demon Soul, Chicken Soup" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Ravenfire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Maldoror, I have rated your fanfic so highly beacause I found it easy to read. The humor, while subtle, was easy to detect. I enjoy reading your fanfics, you have a way of pulling the reader into the story, as if they are a charcter themselves, a skill even some professional writers lack. I hope you continue to write your fanfics. By the way, have you ever considered writing as a career? I believe you would make an excellent author. Sincerely, Ravenfire
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Reviewed By: VenusIsKnownForFlyTraps [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh me gosh I love it.
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Reviewed By: protogirl On: November 21, 2006 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so...dramatic and awesome...actually have no words for this this was really good! It showed a lot of gaara's inner mind, as well as the fact that the kazekage was indeed still human Also like their relationship and how they reflect in public as well as around each other love your series; one of the better Gaalee stories around
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Reviewed By: amiko 16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2006 10:08 CST
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*dies* XDDD You're probably the only one that can make this pairing believable/enjoyable ^.^;
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Reviewed By: hypochondria kills cats On: November 06, 2005 23:29 CST
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this is just too cute. i've always had trouble with these two together, but this story makes the couple work. i love how you kept both Gaara and Lee in character but still made it work between them. great story, please put more out!
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Reviewed By: ohpudgyone On: October 30, 2005 12:38 CST
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Woo hoo. Can't believe you wrote another chappie. I bow to thee.
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Reviewed By: 911 call me On: October 30, 2005 12:37 CST
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Yay! Great fun to read. Really funny how Lee turned the table into firewood and then later how he put a hole in the wall.
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Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 06:22 CST
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Wow, you've really made Gaara/Lee (or Lee/Gaara, it doesn't matter) my very favorite Naruto pairing. You've also made me get addicted to my weekendly fix of fic from you. Your Lee is so very cute, is it pathetic that I now want a husband just like him? I'd even take the eyebrows, too ^___^ Your style of writing is really superior and I wish I could hire you as my personal fanfic author....
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Reviewed By: Shadownsi On: October 30, 2005 04:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've really outdone yourself here. I'm hoping for another sequel. Does that work? A sequel to a sequel? lol. My love for Lee and Gaara has risen at an exponential level since you began writing for his pairing.
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Reviewed By: darkwingedryder [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing as always. You really show your talent for writing wonderful fics. Your works are always funny and emotional and always make my day. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: May nsi On: October 30, 2005 01:42 CDT
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Awesome as usual. You don't need me to tell you how awesome you are, you probably have a hundred other fans clamouring to tell you the same thing, but I'll just tell you anyway. Awesome fic. Awesome writing. Awesome storyline. Anything else? Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. I don't know how you come up with your ideas, but they really feel like they've come from the actual manga.
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 01:42 CDT
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Oooh. I love this fic so much too. There's just something really cute about the way you write Lee. He's so in character and yet still adorable. I especially loved the show of support from Suna, it makes tears come to my eyes. *sniff*. You know, now I'll live in hope that one day you might write another one shot that (can fit but need not be read) with this one and the first one. *hint hint* *nudge nudge*
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