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Title: WAIT FOR IT!!
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 04:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ready ready WOOT WOOT X2389472348723482384723482734237423 i love this story i really do hahaha and i really do hope you get all better soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sogi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 23:57 EDT
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And another fanart for you ^.^ this time it's Inuyasha http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/188537
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii (not signed in) On: June 01, 2006 21:35 EDT
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great chapters! i really am enjoying this fic so please continue. i can't wait to read the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 12:06 EDT
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I read through this chapter for the second time today and enjoyed it just as much as I did the first time. I didn't post a review the first time simply because I couldn't think of anything new that I could say. Sometimes it takes awhile. I admit, I was scared for a moment when we found out Kouga was just outside the building and Inuyasha was away taking care of Kikyou (this had a vague similarity to the real story that was surprising, kudos). However, Inuyasha made it back in time, so all was good. My only suggestion is to clean up the fight scene a bit, I don't know about anyone else, but I was a bit confused about what was going on. I was also glad to see Inuyasha take a chill pill and tell Kagome the truth, 'cause really, it would be dangerous for her if he didn't. Kagome took the news very well and there wasn't nearly as much yelling as I thought there would be. Good on ya :D All in all, you keep impressing me with your plot and character development choices, keeping this story fresh and enjoyable. Keep up the hard work! PS. there were a few grammar errors, small things that a careful read through could pick up. eg. ""Kouga can track you, Kagome?" " I don't think you ment to put a question mark there. :)
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Title: HAH!
Reviewed By: ShaylaBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kouga got his ass beat lol, inu n kag r so cute 2gether. im not a violent person...most of the time...
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Reviewed By: Lil_Pix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 12:10 EDT
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yay! i love your stry im glad you were finally able to update again! i look forward to the next chapter
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Title: LUV IT =)
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 10:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEAZE WRITE MORE!!!! THE STORYS GREAT I WANNA READ WUTS GUNNA HAPPEN NEXT KEEP UP DA GUD WORK X D
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: HENDYCANDY On: May 31, 2006 05:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITS REALLY NICE..INTERESTING.HEHEHEHE..NICE!c",)
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: inu4me On: May 31, 2006 01:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love this fic, and I hope you contouine it, unlike those authors who abandon great storys! Well, I know you just updated but Id like to say.....YOU ROCK!!!! (sorry Ive been up all night studing for exams) Well try to update soon!~~~~♥Rayxus!
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Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 01:07 EDT
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I don't often review because I am usually busy with mine, but if it wasn't for that picture someone did I wouldn;t have gotten interested. This was quite good, kept me interested. I hope to see more
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Title: W00T
Reviewed By: savii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 21:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOOOOOOOVE the update and im with White Luna on the butt kicking idea .. it would make me laugh .. kagome gets bold one good punch to kikyo ha that would make me smile ! hahaha update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: White Luna(offline) On: May 30, 2006 21:16 EDT
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I guess it doesn't really matter. But UFC rocks! I love UFC! w00t!
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Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 20:48 EDT
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Hey! I'm a new reader. inuyashaloverr recommended this fic and I have to say, I can see why! Excellent plot, characters and settings. I've fallen in love with this fic so please put out the next chapter as soon as you can! I'm so hooked!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: The goddess Rhiannon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 19:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated again! And as always it was great. i love it. this better not be your only fanfic you write. Love it, love it love it! oh did i say that i love it? Cant wait until the next part. :)
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Reviewed By: sogi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 19:10 EDT
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so not really a review, just an add on to my comment below **^^** ~ I've done a fanart for you (I couldn't resist!) Hope you enjoy! http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/188474
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